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Array ( [sid] => 7232 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Remember? [time] => 2002-11-22 06:00:00 [hometext] => This is for my daddy...times have been rough and I have shoved him away...but deep down all I need is my daddy.. [bodytext] => Remember when I was a little girl,
you used to hold my hands and I would twirl..
We used to take walks,
having our Daddy daughter talks..
In those days we called our hugs,
big neck poppers..
You were not jut simply my Dad, but my Daddy,
I had forever promised to be your baby...

Years have passed,
since I can remember when you held my hand last..
Maybe not to twirl me around,
but to just give me the comfort that I need..
Those talks we once had,
well you know what happened...
I miss those hugs you gave me,
to be quite honest I miss the way things used to be...

Daddy when I said,
you know what happened..
I was not blaming you for the way things are,
but myself for acting like I did not care..
I lay everything gone wrong on me,
for trying to be the adult I felt I had to be..
And not the little girl I truely was,
All you ever tried to do was console my cries..
And then look what happened,
I pushed you away, and that is sad..
Daddy I promise you,
o matter how old I am that to you...
I will always be,
your baby..
I am sorry for causing you so much strife,
I promise I will make things easier for you in your
life..
I will never push you away,
because no matter how old I get you will always be my
Daddy....

With love to my Daddy....
your baby girl and little bear...Jessi [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 38 [informant] => jessi_leona [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Tributes )
Remember?

Contributed by jessi_leona on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 06:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Tributes



Remember when I was a little girl,
you used to hold my hands and I would twirl..
We used to take walks,
having our Daddy daughter talks..
In those days we called our hugs,
big neck poppers..
You were not jut simply my Dad, but my Daddy,
I had forever promised to be your baby...

Years have passed,
since I can remember when you held my hand last..
Maybe not to twirl me around,
but to just give me the comfort that I need..
Those talks we once had,
well you know what happened...
I miss those hugs you gave me,
to be quite honest I miss the way things used to be...

Daddy when I said,
you know what happened..
I was not blaming you for the way things are,
but myself for acting like I did not care..
I lay everything gone wrong on me,
for trying to be the adult I felt I had to be..
And not the little girl I truely was,
All you ever tried to do was console my cries..
And then look what happened,
I pushed you away, and that is sad..
Daddy I promise you,
o matter how old I am that to you...
I will always be,
your baby..
I am sorry for causing you so much strife,
I promise I will make things easier for you in your
life..
I will never push you away,
because no matter how old I get you will always be my
Daddy....

With love to my Daddy....
your baby girl and little bear...Jessi




Copyright © jessi_leona ... [ 2002-11-22 06:00:00]
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Re: Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 06:12:34 AM AEST
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Very nice tribute to your dad! I really liked this real cute! Christina


Re: Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:30:50 PM AEST
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Aww this is so sweet i really
enjoyed this one, Thanks for sharing
it, it brought tears to my eyes as
a dad is somthing i never had
Thank you
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: Remember? (User Rating: 1 )
by Rage on Saturday, 23rd November 2002 @ 01:36:53 AM AEST
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This is really sweet, straight from the heart of emotions. Great write! No worries, I'm sure once he has read this, the awkwardness between you two will have broken.

Happier Dayz,
~*~RAGE~*~




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