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Watching me hide in
My shroud of tears

You knew I would return
I walked in light and now
My skin is burned

I hate how I love you
And I see in your eyes
You hate me too

Time again to bleed
Kiss me now and drink
What’s left of me

Today I hid your name
But tonight the moon will
Light your claim

I hate you more each day
But I need you here so
Please just stay
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Sever

Contributed by luinil on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 04:52:52 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

How long have you been here
Watching me hide in
My shroud of tears

You knew I would return
I walked in light and now
My skin is burned

I hate how I love you
And I see in your eyes
You hate me too

Time again to bleed
Kiss me now and drink
What’s left of me

Today I hid your name
But tonight the moon will
Light your claim

I hate you more each day
But I need you here so
Please just stay

Copyright Â© luinil ... [ 2004-11-19 16:52:52]
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Re: Sever (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 05:08:07 PM AEST
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cool poem, its sort of mysterious but its awesome!!! i love the metaphors! great job!

Re: Sever (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 06:15:59 PM AEST
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Well written can't stand the sight of them but don't want to be alone. "GREAT POEM"

~DENNIS~

Re: Sever (User Rating: 1 )
by kyletycz on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 01:59:50 AM AEST
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i like this poem alot, i think i relate to it the most in the aspect that i like this girl, and for a while i thought she liked me, but after that went south i still cant get her out of my head, and the more the makes me mad, i still cant help but still want to be with her, even though ive tried so hard to forget about her.....

bad ordeal, but nice write.....

l8r

ninja tycz

Re: Sever (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:34:41 AM AEST
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i know exactly where you are coming from, a very powerful and deep poem,

pixie xx

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