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And leave this world disguised as hell
The pain I thought would fade away
Never left and with me stayed
It lingered in my darkened heart
Slowly killing me part by part
Each and every passing day
Late I night I stayed and prayed
That someday happiness I would feel
And know for once that it was real
But sorrow dominated one last time
All other feelings left my mind
So across my wrist this blade will slice
And with my life I pay the price
The blood is seeping from my veins
With agonized screams I release my pain
And since you never cared or tried
It was you that brought tears to my eyes
And tonight as you lie awake on your bed
Remind yourself, because of you I’m dead [comments] => 2 [counter] => 204 [topic] => 36 [informant] => EternalNight4x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Last Farewell's

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 03:43:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I’ve come to bid my last farewell’s
And leave this world disguised as hell
The pain I thought would fade away
Never left and with me stayed
It lingered in my darkened heart
Slowly killing me part by part
Each and every passing day
Late I night I stayed and prayed
That someday happiness I would feel
And know for once that it was real
But sorrow dominated one last time
All other feelings left my mind
So across my wrist this blade will slice
And with my life I pay the price
The blood is seeping from my veins
With agonized screams I release my pain
And since you never cared or tried
It was you that brought tears to my eyes
And tonight as you lie awake on your bed
Remind yourself, because of you I’m dead

Copyright Â© EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-11-19 15:43:28]
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Re: Last Farewell's (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 03:50:56 PM AEST
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I watched a guy slice his wrists about two months ago.....poor guy.....he eh, was violated by two others of his gender, guess it had a bad effect on him.....seems kinda cold doesn't it....gotta be cold in this world sometimes.....oh...my point is I can relate....i've been there myself....although I figured it make the point clearer if I just shot myself in the shoulder....anyway keep feeling...t's good for you ^_^

Re: Last Farewell's (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:35:32 AM AEST
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such a sad and tragic write,

pixie xx

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