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Array ( [sid] => 7226 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Untitled1 [time] => 2002-11-22 04:15:00 [hometext] => (I rarely title anything) [bodytext] => I put you way up there
High on that floating plate
I gave you my life
Every last inch of energy I owned
But as that plate spun and twirled
I saw you slowly fall
Back to a slow and painful death
Of hatred and of sin
I look away
And note the terror in your eyes
Then smile at the thought
You hit hard
And now I find you've faded away
That plate for you has disolved
And now a new one floats
For someone else has filled the hole
That you so deeply dug
There is a special place inside
That you will always have
Always burning always causing pain
That I will push aside
I will forget the painful past
Though remember the good times
Who knows where you will be
Who knows what I will find
No one will speak of it
Not a single word
Not a single tear will fall
For it has not been earned
Your twisted ways will no longer work on me
For I really do not care
Life will go on as long as Earth spins
Love will be shared
Trust will be earned
And never again will you be
Upon a floating plate [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 6 [informant] => HumGirl18 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Untitled1

Contributed by HumGirl18 on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 04:15:00 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I put you way up there
High on that floating plate
I gave you my life
Every last inch of energy I owned
But as that plate spun and twirled
I saw you slowly fall
Back to a slow and painful death
Of hatred and of sin
I look away
And note the terror in your eyes
Then smile at the thought
You hit hard
And now I find you've faded away
That plate for you has disolved
And now a new one floats
For someone else has filled the hole
That you so deeply dug
There is a special place inside
That you will always have
Always burning always causing pain
That I will push aside
I will forget the painful past
Though remember the good times
Who knows where you will be
Who knows what I will find
No one will speak of it
Not a single word
Not a single tear will fall
For it has not been earned
Your twisted ways will no longer work on me
For I really do not care
Life will go on as long as Earth spins
Love will be shared
Trust will be earned
And never again will you be
Upon a floating plate

Copyright Â© HumGirl18 ... [ 2002-11-22 04:15:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Untitled1 (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 02:39:56 PM AEST
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This is so touching, it's full
of pain and love. it's deep.. Thanks
for sharing this one i enjoyed reading it
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Untitled1 (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 25th November 2002 @ 07:38:43 AM AEST
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Hey, I just wanted to tell you that i thought you poem was really good and that I liked it alot.
Okay well look forward to reading more of your stuff

-secluded_enigma

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