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Slept in because I stayed up late
Thinking
Of you

I called in to work this morning
Because I was busy last night
Dreaming
Of you

I blew off this whole miserable day
Nothing to do because I am
Living
Without you

Ive wasted another day of my life
One more closer to death because
I
Need you

I know if I talk Ill choke
But if I don't Ill regret it because
I
Love you
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I'm Wearing Away

Contributed by alexb on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:24:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Its 10 oclock on a Sunday morning
Slept in because I stayed up late
Thinking
Of you

I called in to work this morning
Because I was busy last night
Dreaming
Of you

I blew off this whole miserable day
Nothing to do because I am
Living
Without you

Ive wasted another day of my life
One more closer to death because
I
Need you

I know if I talk Ill choke
But if I don't Ill regret it because
I
Love you

Copyright © alexb ... [ 2004-11-19 09:24:00]
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Re: I'm Wearing Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 10:10:16 AM AEST
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Very interesting form and exploration of the subject. There are times in our lives when we can't help but write. I think there's a reason for that. This reminds me of the feeling of those times. Interesting stuff.
Stitch

Re: I'm Wearing Away (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:00:11 PM AEST
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wow this is a powerful and sad write.. Love is a very powerful heartfelt emotion.. its hard to stop loving someone when your deeply in love with them and need them.. I hope you can work things out with this person.. if not it wasn't meant to be

Good luck

peace and hope

JENNI

Re: I'm Wearing Away (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 07:00:40 PM AEST
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this poem touched me in a specila way....because i know the feeling.....this is a sad poem but so beautiful....excellent job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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