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Array ( [sid] => 72207 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Not Perfect [time] => 2004-11-18 22:52:22 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I know I'm not perfect
I will never be
But that won't keep me from being me
Yes I will do some bad things in my time
And I know I will have some good times
Don't yell because your mad that I did bad in school
You don't know how hard it is
In fact you don't know anything about me
I am not like my brother
I do know that
I always give you respect that you lack
How come you blame me when it isn't even me
You won't even listen to my side of the story
What have I done wrong?
The worse thing I did was get two Fs and I know people worse
I could do things much worse
But I don't for you
If I could tell you all of this
You wouldn't understand
I don't even think you care
Otherwise you'd ask me what's on my mind
How is school and are you doing fine
Maybe if you asked one of those questions things would be better
Only if you cared [comments] => 4 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 43 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Not Perfect

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:52:22 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I know I'm not perfect
I will never be
But that won't keep me from being me
Yes I will do some bad things in my time
And I know I will have some good times
Don't yell because your mad that I did bad in school
You don't know how hard it is
In fact you don't know anything about me
I am not like my brother
I do know that
I always give you respect that you lack
How come you blame me when it isn't even me
You won't even listen to my side of the story
What have I done wrong?
The worse thing I did was get two Fs and I know people worse
I could do things much worse
But I don't for you
If I could tell you all of this
You wouldn't understand
I don't even think you care
Otherwise you'd ask me what's on my mind
How is school and are you doing fine
Maybe if you asked one of those questions things would be better
Only if you cared

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2004-11-18 22:52:22]
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Re: Not Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:10:17 PM AEST
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Writen with such passion... I can identify with this..
Keep them coming...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Not Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:17:19 PM AEST
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aww this is a sad write.. very powerful and well expressed great job

Peace and hope
JENNI

Re: Not Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 11:29:34 PM AEST
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Ahh... I am so glad I am done with school. I was "expected" to get A'sanything else was bad... It was ridiculous. Parents forget what it is like somtimes to be a kid. Good job.

Re: Not Perfect (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:58:25 AM AEST
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wow i likes very much i am 20 and i will be 21 in three days and still feel like no one ever gets me or gets who i am i never really did good in school never met my potential but the never gave me anything to chalange me well do not feel too bad that you feel like no one cares or understands coz you are really not alone you have me and a thousand more ppl who feel the same way

if you ever feel like you want to chat just look me up

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