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Array ( [sid] => 72205 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Your Heart Might Last a Little Longer [time] => 2004-11-18 22:46:20 [hometext] => To you ... please stop working so hard so maybe your heart will last a little longer [bodytext] => If you die
I can not see
What will happen to them and me
She will cry
I will too
Not as bad as her losing you
I know you are sick
But you won't admit
And now that you're scared you are starting to care
You say when you die
You don't want people to grieve over you
But you are such a wonderful person
That that will be hard to do
You have a bad heart
And you almost died
But luckily onstar
Saved your life
I'm so thankful to have known you this long
This isn't a goodbye
Since you are still here
But this is to show you how much I care
If your heart shall last
Let it be
Stop working so hard
And yelling at the people you love [comments] => 1 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 23 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )

Your Heart Might Last a Little Longer

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:46:20 PM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems

If you die
I can not see
What will happen to them and me
She will cry
I will too
Not as bad as her losing you
I know you are sick
But you won't admit
And now that you're scared you are starting to care
You say when you die
You don't want people to grieve over you
But you are such a wonderful person
That that will be hard to do
You have a bad heart
And you almost died
But luckily onstar
Saved your life
I'm so thankful to have known you this long
This isn't a goodbye
Since you are still here
But this is to show you how much I care
If your heart shall last
Let it be
Stop working so hard
And yelling at the people you love

Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2004-11-18 22:46:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Your Heart Might Last a Little Longer (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:57:23 PM AEST
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A touching poem.... Brought a tear to my eyes...cuz I recalled my fav uncle died of a heart attack after yelling at some workers.....
Good write.... hope he listens..
Jenni

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