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[sid] => 72144
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => RAZOR BLADE TOM
[time] => 2004-11-18 17:08:14
[hometext] => Humm I really don't know what I was thinking It just sounded good.
[bodytext] => She called him the other day hoping he was still around. It's been so long since they have had a night on the town. Her and her old friend RAZOR BLADE TOM. He's always around whenever she calls. But there was something different in his voice in the way he said hello. anger hateful Upset. She hasn't called in so long. And now you want me to ease your pain. You want a night on the town with your old friend RAZOR BLADE TOM. I'll be there a eight and we can stay up real late at least till you pass out from lack of blood it will be great. She smile and gets everything ready. Picks out a new dress and awaits for him to arrive. She writes a note to her family and friends. Please don't cry I just want to be happy again. The door bell rings ten till eight. There he was dressed in sliver with a red hat and red cane. Hello my sweet you look great. I like that red dress did you pick it out just for me. How sweet. Lets get going life is a wasting a night on the town with your old friend RAZOR BLADE TOM. They went to the park and sat in the dark and began to slice her fears away. Not to deep now we have so much more to do. Lets go see a movie and have a drink or two. They got their ticket sat way in the back and watch the movie "BLOOD IS MY GAME 2". She held him close firmly griped tight in her hands and watch her blood as it came trickling down. It was half pass ten when the movie was done. Her head was spinning from lack of blood. As the walked to the bar just in front of her house. She fell to one knee and smiled with glee. Come on my dear theres so much to do. Lets have some drinks and ease this pain we call life. They went in the bar called "LIFE NO MORE" Order some drinks and played some songs. The bartender asked if she was ok. She just smiled why yes I'm just fine. I'm out on the town with my old friend RAZOR BLADE TOM. They drank till close and walked on home. Would you like to come in my friend I don't want to be alone. She made him a drink. As he took off his coat and sat on her bed it was time to get close. Closer than they have ever been. I'm glad your hear this is the last time I will call you again my friend RAZOR BLADE TOM. She gets undress and laid down in bed as he began to spread her flesh apart. You like that my sweet doesn't it feel good to bleed all your care away. She looked at him with a smile and a tear "YES" just let me life end. She is now asleep. No worries No cares And with her old friend RAZOR BLADE TOM. BY DENNIS LEMMEN [comments] => 5 [counter] => 176 [topic] => 36 [informant] => lemmen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
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