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Array ( [sid] => 72112 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ***** [time] => 2004-11-18 14:28:08 [hometext] => enjoy [bodytext] => when you feel they like you
they really hate you
i know you dont wanna believe me
but let the truth be

i hate you
i wanna kill
i wanna throw you
outside the bus,what a thrill

you're a *****
without a useful ****
i'm gonna one day get my revenge
you're an immature lil *****

you dont even know me
but i guess thats what you're good at
you make my life so angry
the feeling is back

now i'm ready to commit
commit a crime
and i wouldnt even feel ashamed
i'm gonna slit your throat

i get home and i start punching walls
you think you're so dam funny
when really you're really retarded
would you do this if we were standing
toe to toe?just let me know

all them feelins are back
the feeling was only gone
for accouple of days
i wanna kick you in the balls

try being me
lets see what you'd do
so no one blame me
if he turns up dead

shes no help either
her body will be burried
right beside his
and i'll be standing over them laughing

as they lay dead
they will only be the laugh of my life
i know its not right
but its just in my head

for now [comments] => 2 [counter] => 147 [topic] => 6 [informant] => savedbydeath [notes] => Edited by mod_6 for language.....18-11-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
*****

Contributed by savedbydeath on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:28:08 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



when you feel they like you
they really hate you
i know you dont wanna believe me
but let the truth be

i hate you
i wanna kill
i wanna throw you
outside the bus,what a thrill

you're a *****
without a useful ****
i'm gonna one day get my revenge
you're an immature lil *****

you dont even know me
but i guess thats what you're good at
you make my life so angry
the feeling is back

now i'm ready to commit
commit a crime
and i wouldnt even feel ashamed
i'm gonna slit your throat

i get home and i start punching walls
you think you're so dam funny
when really you're really retarded
would you do this if we were standing
toe to toe?just let me know

all them feelins are back
the feeling was only gone
for accouple of days
i wanna kick you in the balls

try being me
lets see what you'd do
so no one blame me
if he turns up dead

shes no help either
her body will be burried
right beside his
and i'll be standing over them laughing

as they lay dead
they will only be the laugh of my life
i know its not right
but its just in my head

for now




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Re: ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:05:38 PM AEST
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this makes me shudder and the mods are going to get you sooner or later..don't get mad if they do..lol. prick and dick are not allowable used in that way..someone's asleep at the wheel..but just wait..hehehe.. I won't tell. I love conspiracy.


Re: ***** (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Tuesday, 30th November 2004 @ 09:35:12 AM AEST
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freaky girl not bad tho dont kick mine id so cry lol




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