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Array ( [sid] => 7208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Replacement [time] => 2002-11-22 00:00:00 [hometext] => I hate that this happens so often to me. [bodytext] => I nuzzled you - Like a true love
I took you in - Like a true friend
I fell in love - You always seemed to care
I was always yours - A Squee Toy just for you
And I loved this - A giddy little girl
Now I've been replaced - Or so it feels
This cute girl - Perfect it seems
Smart and cute with a spikey collar - Turns you on
And shes Jewish - Most important; like you
She shares your beliefs
Shes perfect for you - I understand
Shes everything - I could never be anything
You know I would do or change anything - Just for you.
I miss your warmth - I've been replaced. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 43 [informant] => DreamsOfDark [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

My Replacement

Contributed by DreamsOfDark on Friday, 22nd November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I nuzzled you - Like a true love
I took you in - Like a true friend
I fell in love - You always seemed to care
I was always yours - A Squee Toy just for you
And I loved this - A giddy little girl
Now I've been replaced - Or so it feels
This cute girl - Perfect it seems
Smart and cute with a spikey collar - Turns you on
And shes Jewish - Most important; like you
She shares your beliefs
Shes perfect for you - I understand
Shes everything - I could never be anything
You know I would do or change anything - Just for you.
I miss your warmth - I've been replaced.

Copyright © DreamsOfDark ... [ 2002-11-22 00:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Replacement (User Rating: 1 )
by TundraHydra on Wednesday, 22nd January 2003 @ 07:33:09 PM AEST
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This whole poem makes me sad and there is nothing I can really do to help except to keep lovin you and hopin that it makes your pains go away. For me though you will never be replaced

Re: My Replacement (User Rating: 1 )
by Feelin_Like_A_SadFellow on Thursday, 10th April 2003 @ 08:59:18 PM AEST
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its hard to compete with for a heart... but sometimes if things are just right things will go in your favor

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