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[aid] => mick
[title] => 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
[time] => 2004-11-18 03:34:07
[hometext] => this one is for tommy as i looked at the date and realized how long it has been. since the day god took him away from us.
[bodytext] => just another sleepless night as i hold my pillow tight,
visions of love lost dance in my head,
the many nights we spent cuddled in this bed.
1 year, 9 months, and 12 days
Do you still see me here all alone?
Do you wish you could come home?
When did it say that love had to end?
Why did God take my best friend?
1 year, 9 months, and 12 days
Since you've been gone theres and empty space,
my love is gone and I cannot replace,
Cannot replace the arms that held me tight
the man who cried when we had a fight.
Since you've been gone I've forgotten,
who I am, all this since you've been gone,
I walk alone in the dark hours before dawn,
some how I wander what I did wrong.
You were a blessing given to me,
you were a light in the dark that showed me what I needed to see
1 year, 9 months, 12 days, ago I lost my light,
Now I walk alone in the dark, nothing left but just a spark,
of the woman you loved, the one you needed,
the one who when you died,her heart was depleted.
Each day that goes by I forget a little more,
i still wander what the silly fights were for.
I wander why I have to lay here all night and cry.
Why I must go on with out you in my life?
1 year 4 months and 2 days ago
I was going to be your wife.
but 1 year, 9 months, 12 days ago,
god took you life
[comments] => 8
[counter] => 250
[topic] => 39
[informant] => brokenwings
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 25
[ratings] => 5
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => Grief
)
1 year, 9 months, 12 days
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:34:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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just another sleepless night as i hold my pillow tight,
visions of love lost dance in my head,
the many nights we spent cuddled in this bed.
1 year, 9 months, and 12 days
Do you still see me here all alone?
Do you wish you could come home?
When did it say that love had to end?
Why did God take my best friend?
1 year, 9 months, and 12 days
Since you've been gone theres and empty space,
my love is gone and I cannot replace,
Cannot replace the arms that held me tight
the man who cried when we had a fight.
Since you've been gone I've forgotten,
who I am, all this since you've been gone,
I walk alone in the dark hours before dawn,
some how I wander what I did wrong.
You were a blessing given to me,
you were a light in the dark that showed me what I needed to see
1 year, 9 months, 12 days, ago I lost my light,
Now I walk alone in the dark, nothing left but just a spark,
of the woman you loved, the one you needed,
the one who when you died,her heart was depleted.
Each day that goes by I forget a little more,
i still wander what the silly fights were for.
I wander why I have to lay here all night and cry.
Why I must go on with out you in my life?
1 year 4 months and 2 days ago
I was going to be your wife.
but 1 year, 9 months, 12 days ago,
god took you life
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:03:15 AM AEST
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So beautifully tender and compassionate..so much heartfelt sadness and sorrow..I am sorry for your grief and loss, you will never fully lose the memories...they will remain a part of you foreever held in your heart...a place where all good things reside.
Take care always and peace watch over you always. |
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:38:24 AM AEST
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I'm so sorry you lost each other.
This is so sad, and I can almost see how you feel in the poem.
Such a sweet heartfelt write.
*hugs tons*
Phil xxx |
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by Jenni_K on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:48:10 AM AEST
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This is very touching and so heartfelt.... I am so sorry for your loss... But you are doing a great job of keeping him alive in your heart...
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by venkat on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 04:48:30 AM AEST
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| Very beautifully wtritten your love and sad ness....heart moving.. its a great expression of your heart felt sorrow regarding your beloved..god bless..peace..venkat |
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by chocolate_girl on
Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 08:30:04 AM AEST
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| *shivers* lots and lots. this is beautiful and alot of love comes thru too. its really strange how someone can be there one minute and not the next. the hardest, strangest,most heartbreaking thing 'alive' xxxx |
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by babygurl33 on
Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 02:59:31 PM AEST
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very sry yu lost ur love.....something like that happened to me...my love took his own life b/c he wasn't happy.....he said he was messing my life up...but he wasn't...I miss him a lot...so I kind of know how you feel....I moved on and I found a knew love whom I'm engaged to...but my one true love knows I will never forget...great poem...
xxxDestinyxxx |
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by LEMMEN on
Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 06:19:29 AM AEST
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May he hear your words and know this love you have for him. Still to this day. He maybe be gone but still lives within your dreams. And that shall always be. tasha life will not be the same but life is what he would want. For you to be happy while he is away. Your souls will reunite someday cause love is a enteral flame. And may you find the strengh to visit him.
~~DENNIS~~ |
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Re: 1 year, 9 months, 12 days
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by Trisha on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:01:25 PM AEST
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This was really good but I am sorry god taken him away from you. I know god has planes for everyone
and we can't do nothing about it. |
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