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Array ( [sid] => 72042 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc [time] => 2004-11-18 01:56:50 [hometext] => This is the final countdown of the seconds of death's bloody clock... Tic... Toc... I just envision this is what it would be for someone who desperately wants to take their own life... This is just my take on it ... nothing more ... nothing less... [bodytext] => Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I hear the sound
As my pained... anguished head spins all about... round and round

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

It has all come down to this....
There is nothing in this life... I'm going to miss

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

For all has been lost...
There's nothing left to be tossed

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

The years have all been a dream
Just one of life's devilish schemes

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I have nothing more to live for...
Nothing more... as I make my hasty departure through life's backdoor

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I'm just a poor soul... who's lived life alone
No lives were saved... not even my own...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

My heart has been broken... by those I've loved
Now... push has finally come to shove

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

This is it... it's finally over... said and done
This soul is finally free to run

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

Fleeing a life... full of heartache and pain
Oh... how this life has driven me insane

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

Gun in hand...
I'm ready to take my stand...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I'll stand before my maker...
And I'll hear Him say... "You're a life taker!
DEPART FROM ME... YOU WICKED DEVIL... I KNEW YE NOT!!!
Because Hell is where you're going to rot!"

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

The days seem like hours...
The hours seem like minutes...
The minutes seem like seconds...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

With the pull of the trigger...
My life is magnified bigger...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

Exploding... expanding in... and then out... and then in... again
'Til there is nothing left... my dear... dear friends

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

This is the final countdown of the seconds of death's bloody clock
Tic... Toc... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 36 [informant] => kidpoet_213 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc

Contributed by kidpoet_213 on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:56:50 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I hear the sound
As my pained... anguished head spins all about... round and round

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

It has all come down to this....
There is nothing in this life... I'm going to miss

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

For all has been lost...
There's nothing left to be tossed

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

The years have all been a dream
Just one of life's devilish schemes

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I have nothing more to live for...
Nothing more... as I make my hasty departure through life's backdoor

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I'm just a poor soul... who's lived life alone
No lives were saved... not even my own...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

My heart has been broken... by those I've loved
Now... push has finally come to shove

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

This is it... it's finally over... said and done
This soul is finally free to run

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

Fleeing a life... full of heartache and pain
Oh... how this life has driven me insane

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

Gun in hand...
I'm ready to take my stand...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

I'll stand before my maker...
And I'll hear Him say... "You're a life taker!
DEPART FROM ME... YOU WICKED DEVIL... I KNEW YE NOT!!!
Because Hell is where you're going to rot!"

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

The days seem like hours...
The hours seem like minutes...
The minutes seem like seconds...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

With the pull of the trigger...
My life is magnified bigger...

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

Exploding... expanding in... and then out... and then in... again
'Til there is nothing left... my dear... dear friends

Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc
Beats the angry clock

This is the final countdown of the seconds of death's bloody clock
Tic... Toc...




Copyright © kidpoet_213 ... [ 2004-11-18 01:56:50]
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Re: Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 02:57:10 AM AEST
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Like a story unfolding is how I percived this write...discriptive and revealing...your thoughts on this subject conveyed well...beautifully written..and excellently composed.


Re: Tic... Toc... Tic... Toc (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 10:27:32 PM AEST
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an amazing write. needs to be published. like it very much .... but.. HERE IS SOME FLOWERS FOR YOU.. GET A SMILE ON THAT PRETTY FACE CAUSE GOD LOVES YOU.... HE DONT MAKE JUNK. YOUR A RIGTEOUS CHILD OF GOD.. no weapon formed against you will prosper............. sandy




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