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Array ( [sid] => 72039 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Need To See Red [time] => 2004-11-18 01:20:14 [hometext] => [bodytext] => The anger and rage boils within
Feeling my temper rise again
Is there no stop to this
Is there true happiness?

Questions I ask my daily
Not understanding this self hatred
Never feeling worthy
Of anything good

Feeling a need for self-punishment
And a need to see blood
All I feel is judgement
All I am is mis-understood

Don't know where I'll cut this time
Cause everytime I'm found out
I just need to feel ease, peace of mind
And no, death is not what this is about.
Not this time :( [comments] => 4 [counter] => 247 [topic] => 13 [informant] => witch_derna [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

A Need To See Red

Contributed by witch_derna on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:20:14 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The anger and rage boils within
Feeling my temper rise again
Is there no stop to this
Is there true happiness?

Questions I ask my daily
Not understanding this self hatred
Never feeling worthy
Of anything good

Feeling a need for self-punishment
And a need to see blood
All I feel is judgement
All I am is mis-understood

Don't know where I'll cut this time
Cause everytime I'm found out
I just need to feel ease, peace of mind
And no, death is not what this is about.
Not this time :(

Copyright © witch_derna ... [ 2004-11-18 01:20:14]
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Re: A Need To See Red (User Rating: 1 )
by SocialMisfit on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:32:14 AM AEST
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hmmm very dark very much how i have felt at some times, but back to the poem it has good flow and good ryme gj

SM

Re: A Need To See Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 03:16:20 AM AEST
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Raw feelings drip from your well chosen words..anger sadness they are all here...within in ink..and soon to be in blood.
A beautiful write showing strength and depth.

Re: A Need To See Red (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 05:04:48 PM AEST
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a shiver worthy poem indeed. I felt the pain
that seeped through every line. I wish I could
say I couldn't relate but I can. I hope that you
have only written on paper instead of "writing"
on your skin. A wonderful poem.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: A Need To See Red (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 09:13:17 AM AEST
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Is there true happiness? YES you have filled my heart beyound true happiness. All I feel is judgement. Let no one judge lest they be judged. I can not judge for I am of the same. All I am is mis-understood. We all are unless we find the speical someone that truly understands us and our ways. I just wish you would let me see this inner pain this force that drives you to cut this way. Have faith my love I shall forever be here by your side in good and bad. As a friend as a lover as someone that truly understands that bleeding is not just a game.

~~LOVE DENNIS~~

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