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Array ( [sid] => 72032 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Along Came These Tears [time] => 2004-11-17 23:39:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => No matter how I look at the situation.
It just leaves me sore.
All this pain and burning.
Can't take much more.
I don't understand why i'm disolving.
While i'm lying on the floor.
You're stuck in my head,in my throat.
Beating me like a fool that i am.
i'm sorry i'm not perfect.
i'm nothing to you.
i'm sorry i can be anything true.
if i could turn back time i'd never be born.
then in your sides,there would be no thorns.
i cry to you to stop just for the time being.
but i geuss you enjoy these unnecesary beatings.
if it makes you happy,that's all that i care.
and know that for your anger,i will always be there. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 48 [informant] => tasteof_ink [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Along Came These Tears

Contributed by tasteof_ink on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:39:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

No matter how I look at the situation.
It just leaves me sore.
All this pain and burning.
Can't take much more.
I don't understand why i'm disolving.
While i'm lying on the floor.
You're stuck in my head,in my throat.
Beating me like a fool that i am.
i'm sorry i'm not perfect.
i'm nothing to you.
i'm sorry i can be anything true.
if i could turn back time i'd never be born.
then in your sides,there would be no thorns.
i cry to you to stop just for the time being.
but i geuss you enjoy these unnecesary beatings.
if it makes you happy,that's all that i care.
and know that for your anger,i will always be there.

Copyright © tasteof_ink ... [ 2004-11-17 23:39:36]
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Re: Along Came These Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:49:52 PM AEST
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awww...better to get attention for anger than no attention at all?..that sucks big time..Nice that you can let it out in your writing.. thanks for sharing..:-*)

Re: Along Came These Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by TheRaven on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:00:27 AM AEST
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i can feel your bittersweet pain through your awesome writing. could be from a parent or significant other, huh? *hug* hang in there and keep up the good writes.
the raven

Re: Along Came These Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 01:32:48 AM AEST
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Ive been there. It was the kind of attention he knew how to give. Hope all will be better for you soon.
Brightest of Blessings to you.
MaDonna

Re: Along Came These Tears (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 06:42:21 AM AEST
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I know the feeling in which you describe, though I have felt the pain and the burn of the lash...I think I prefered to be ignored than feel that anymore, cool poem very visual and sad.

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