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Array ( [sid] => 72016 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my dark coy mistress [time] => 2004-11-17 21:37:48 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Love is
a dark
twisted
mistress
it's a
knife
covered
with sweet
words and
kisses
stabbing you
in the back
of the heart
turning it's blade
tearing you
apart...
Love's a wolf
and I'm the lamb
Love is nothing
but a choking hand
Love is a snake
with puppy dog eyes
Love is truely
a deadly surprise... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 65 [informant] => elatednbliss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

my dark coy mistress

Contributed by elatednbliss on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:37:48 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

Love is
a dark
twisted
mistress
it's a
knife
covered
with sweet
words and
kisses
stabbing you
in the back
of the heart
turning it's blade
tearing you
apart...
Love's a wolf
and I'm the lamb
Love is nothing
but a choking hand
Love is a snake
with puppy dog eyes
Love is truely
a deadly surprise...

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Re: my dark coy mistress (User Rating: 1 )
by ThePumpkinKing on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:39:43 PM AEST
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such a true poem...i love it.

I love a good metaphor and you had quite a few =), excellent writing here

God bless

Re: my dark coy mistress (User Rating: 1 )
by Lessa on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:51:24 PM AEST
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a very dark look at love, sad, i guess its tru when you havent found the right one, keep your head up, when your tru love finds you love is the lamb and you are the keeper.

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