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Array ( [sid] => 72013 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => kiss the blade [time] => 2004-11-17 21:20:49 [hometext] => i just don't care anymore.... [bodytext] => There is something
under my bed
and I hear it breathing
When I lay my head
somethings lurking under my sheets
sending chills down my spine and it
gives me the creeps
But why should I care
since I put it there
And I'll hopefully use it
One day if I dare
So I should stop all this crying
and all of these tears
and be brave about it
then end all my fears
of being alone cauase I don't deserve to be...
those are my last thoughts
as I push this knife in me...
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 65 [informant] => elatednbliss [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

kiss the blade

Contributed by elatednbliss on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:20:49 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

There is something
under my bed
and I hear it breathing
When I lay my head
somethings lurking under my sheets
sending chills down my spine and it
gives me the creeps
But why should I care
since I put it there
And I'll hopefully use it
One day if I dare
So I should stop all this crying
and all of these tears
and be brave about it
then end all my fears
of being alone cauase I don't deserve to be...
those are my last thoughts
as I push this knife in me...

Copyright © elatednbliss ... [ 2004-11-17 21:20:49]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: kiss the blade (User Rating: 1 )
by Dragontear27 on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:08:09 PM AEST
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nice poem pain comes to everyone not just a single entity im sure you know that, but of course why wouldn't you? Lol anyways great poem keep it up.

Re: kiss the blade (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 12:06:39 AM AEST
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very haunting and well written. I hope you use
your talents in writing instead of giving in to
the temptation that many before have
pondered.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: kiss the blade (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Thursday, 18th November 2004 @ 07:34:48 AM AEST
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very good
I really enjoyed reading this.
I hope you don't give in.

like me...

*~givingin~*

Re: kiss the blade (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 07:47:01 PM AEST
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hey, its a good poem:) i feel your pain:( hang in there!

Re: kiss the blade (User Rating: 1 )
by seci on Thursday, 26th May 2005 @ 09:51:19 PM AEST
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you are a very good writer. the poem is really good as well.hopefully you do not give in,but other then that , you are a excellent writerorshould i say poet.

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