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Array ( [sid] => 72002 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Makings Of Your Mind [time] => 2004-11-17 19:43:35 [hometext] => wierd poem yes i no, but comment tho lol, its about how i like gettin into ppls minds, dun ask its wierd i no lol [bodytext] => It's really not that hard for me to get into your mind,
To understand your thinking pattern you've left behind,
I guess it's a gift I have that proves that I know,
How your past, present and future come and go,
I can see the very corners in the depths of your soul,
The very essence of your being that makes you whole,
Look at me bewildered as if you never had a clue,
You can't understand it even if you truely knew,
As I wield my powers and then figure out your secrets,
Digging down deeper than before, down to the deepest,
Don't let the darkness overcome your minds will,
Because time will never stop, it never stands still,
Learn to forget the past, and carry on making it better,
Stay out of the rain, adapt to the more warm weather,
Give up the negatives and see what you will find,
These are my insights on the makings of your mind.

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The Makings Of Your Mind

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:43:35 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

It's really not that hard for me to get into your mind,
To understand your thinking pattern you've left behind,
I guess it's a gift I have that proves that I know,
How your past, present and future come and go,
I can see the very corners in the depths of your soul,
The very essence of your being that makes you whole,
Look at me bewildered as if you never had a clue,
You can't understand it even if you truely knew,
As I wield my powers and then figure out your secrets,
Digging down deeper than before, down to the deepest,
Don't let the darkness overcome your minds will,
Because time will never stop, it never stands still,
Learn to forget the past, and carry on making it better,
Stay out of the rain, adapt to the more warm weather,
Give up the negatives and see what you will find,
These are my insights on the makings of your mind.

Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-11-17 19:43:35]
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Re: The Makings Of Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Mesano on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:48:37 PM AEST
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nice poem... i know exactly what you are talking about

-Nicki

Re: The Makings Of Your Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 05:23:16 PM AEST
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Interesting . . . i'll give you that. Weird? Perhaps . . .

Keep writing.

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