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Array ( [sid] => 71954 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Five Shots [time] => 2004-11-17 14:30:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I went to the dentist
To get fillings in my teeth
Two shots I was given at first to numb my mouth
But he started drilling
I jumped out of my chair
The pain hurt so bad
And yes I was scared
So another shot I was given
Wow that makes three
Away he started drilling and I said owwie
He stopped again and said another one it is
Another shot makes four
So there he goes at it again
I felt like crying when he drilled again
Because it hurt so much
One more shot is what I will give
So he put in the needle
Yes that makes five
Started drilling once again
And it hurt so much
That I said no more
So a filling I was not given
And my tooth is in pain
School I did miss
And I'm stuck with a numb mouth and a temporary filling
I am afraid of the dentist and I no longer like needles
The novacaine numbed only my mouth
But none of the pain
This was a horrible
Horrible day [comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 43 [informant] => UnlovedChild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Five Shots

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:30:38 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I went to the dentist
To get fillings in my teeth
Two shots I was given at first to numb my mouth
But he started drilling
I jumped out of my chair
The pain hurt so bad
And yes I was scared
So another shot I was given
Wow that makes three
Away he started drilling and I said owwie
He stopped again and said another one it is
Another shot makes four
So there he goes at it again
I felt like crying when he drilled again
Because it hurt so much
One more shot is what I will give
So he put in the needle
Yes that makes five
Started drilling once again
And it hurt so much
That I said no more
So a filling I was not given
And my tooth is in pain
School I did miss
And I'm stuck with a numb mouth and a temporary filling
I am afraid of the dentist and I no longer like needles
The novacaine numbed only my mouth
But none of the pain
This was a horrible
Horrible day




Copyright © UnlovedChild ... [ 2004-11-17 14:30:38]
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Re: Five Shots (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:48:58 PM AEST
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haha i love this poem! you are very talented ^_^ great job!


Re: Five Shots (User Rating: 1 )
by xxx_lover on Friday, 17th August 2007 @ 01:20:24 PM AEST
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This is good as a comedy, but I am not sure how I feel about it overall...




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