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Array ( [sid] => 71950 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => postive but negative [time] => 2004-11-17 14:09:41 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I'm hot but I'm cold.
I want you but I cant have you.
I'm alive but I don't see why.
There is a reason but it's not working.
I'm writing but no ones reading.
Tears are falling but no one catches them.

The door is open but I climb out the window.
I turn my cellphone off but i want to see if you txt me.
I close my eyes but everythings the same cept darker.
I want to be noticed but for all the wrong reasons.
I have loud music but I just cant hear anything.
There's no one to talk but i cant handle the abuse.

People stare at me but they don't see that I'm upset. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 143 [topic] => 13 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

postive but negative

Contributed by surge_joebot on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:09:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I'm hot but I'm cold.
I want you but I cant have you.
I'm alive but I don't see why.
There is a reason but it's not working.
I'm writing but no ones reading.
Tears are falling but no one catches them.

The door is open but I climb out the window.
I turn my cellphone off but i want to see if you txt me.
I close my eyes but everythings the same cept darker.
I want to be noticed but for all the wrong reasons.
I have loud music but I just cant hear anything.
There's no one to talk but i cant handle the abuse.

People stare at me but they don't see that I'm upset.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-17 14:09:41]
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Re: postive but negative (User Rating: 1 )
by savedbydeath on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:26:12 PM AEST
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ppl dont u see that ur upset bc u dont let them,u probably smile alot so when a person smiles everyone else assumes that ur happy inside and out,i know how u feel,u kinda feel like no one can see,or no one can understand,have no worries theres always someone out there thats willing to take the time to understand,AWESOME write,keep up the great job

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Re: postive but negative (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:09:59 PM AEST
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I can relate to this, this is a Good Poem, I liked it alot I really liked the part were you wrote
" I'm hot but I'm cold.
I want you but I cant have you.
I'm alive but I don't see why.
There is a reason but it's not working.
I'm writing but no ones reading.
Tears are falling but no one catches them."

Well Stay Stong !! Great Write !! good luck!

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