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To your body they want to do harm not good,
They dream about cutting & slitting your skin,
Exposing your flesh & bones from deep within.

Their thoughts are filled with rotting flesh,
Of your pretty face they long to make a mess,
Rip out your heart; take its last beat,
Their evil desires will never take a back seat.

They spend their days laying in wait,
Waiting so that murder can seal your fate,
They show no mercy as you beg for your life,
They laugh out loud as they plunge in the knife.

You can’t spot a killer by their facial features,
They are like chameleons, such devious creatures,
To talk to they are just like you & me,
They don’t leave tell tale signs for you to see.

To take a peek inside a killers mind,
Would make you wish you had long ago gone blind,
They feel adrenalin when they seek out a new kill,
To see someone dying gives them such a thrill.

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Desires Of A Killer

Contributed by pixie on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:10:03 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Desires of a killer would chill your blood,
To your body they want to do harm not good,
They dream about cutting & slitting your skin,
Exposing your flesh & bones from deep within.

Their thoughts are filled with rotting flesh,
Of your pretty face they long to make a mess,
Rip out your heart; take its last beat,
Their evil desires will never take a back seat.

They spend their days laying in wait,
Waiting so that murder can seal your fate,
They show no mercy as you beg for your life,
They laugh out loud as they plunge in the knife.

You can’t spot a killer by their facial features,
They are like chameleons, such devious creatures,
To talk to they are just like you & me,
They don’t leave tell tale signs for you to see.

To take a peek inside a killers mind,
Would make you wish you had long ago gone blind,
They feel adrenalin when they seek out a new kill,
To see someone dying gives them such a thrill.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-11-17 09:10:03]
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Re: Desires Of A Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:45:48 AM AEST
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Ok, you've given me chills. This is excellent---especially the part about killers not being recognizable. Reminds me of what I've learned of satan. If he truly appeared ugly, he'd be easy to avoid, but he always look so inviting and sucks us in before changing to his own shape for the kill.
Good write.
Stitch

Re: Desires Of A Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:55:00 AM AEST
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Very graphic, but certainly does a good job of depicting evil in the world.

Good job, and a good write
Willofree

Re: Desires Of A Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:36:01 AM AEST
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very amazing write i liked it alot.

Re: Desires Of A Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:55:05 AM AEST
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*looks over shoulder*
Ahhh! lol.
Nah, seriousy though, I don't know why movies don't scare me, when some poems give me major chills. lol.
*grins*
I like this hunni.
*huggies*
Phil xxx

Re: Desires Of A Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:39:29 AM AEST
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wow, that one was so good!
I loved that write.
GREAT JOB!
*~givingin~*

Re: Desires Of A Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:59:25 PM AEST
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reminds me of an evil that touched her one day........one word.......chilling....

Re: Desires Of A Killer (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:33:44 PM AEST
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wow very well written and powerful write....keep posting

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