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Array ( [sid] => 71896 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => STABBED! [time] => 2004-11-17 07:33:53 [hometext] => This is a small poem, not one of my best. [bodytext] => Stabbed again,
it hurts so much,
the wound is deep,
I cannot touch,

My soul is hurt,
my emotions torn,
weren’t you my friend,
I could have sworn.

My back has been stabbed,
again and again,
my heart has been ripped,
right out from my hand.

I thought we were friends,
I thought I nice,
yet my back has been stabbed,
not once, but twice.

I guess now it’s over,
we’re no longer friends,
this is the last time,
I make amens. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 32 [informant] => givingin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

STABBED!

Contributed by givingin on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:33:53 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Stabbed again,
it hurts so much,
the wound is deep,
I cannot touch,

My soul is hurt,
my emotions torn,
weren’t you my friend,
I could have sworn.

My back has been stabbed,
again and again,
my heart has been ripped,
right out from my hand.

I thought we were friends,
I thought I nice,
yet my back has been stabbed,
not once, but twice.

I guess now it’s over,
we’re no longer friends,
this is the last time,
I make amens.

Copyright © givingin ... [ 2004-11-17 07:33:53]
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Re: STABBED! (User Rating: 1 )
by mysticpoet on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 07:47:11 AM AEST
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Good Poem, we all have had people we thought were friends, only to have them say one thing to you and another to someone else. That is no one's friend!

Re: STABBED! (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 11:47:27 AM AEST
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this poem was filled with your pain, you made the readers feel what you do, very good write, well expressed poem,

pixie xx

Re: STABBED! (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:44:53 PM AEST
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i feel this way right now with one of my best friends who is now dating the guy who ive loved for 9 months now and who i still love very much.....she stabbed me in the back and ripped out my heart....but for some reason i cant talk to her aoubt it and tell her how upset it makes me...i wish i coul b ethat strong......anyways after hearing my long story....lol this is a great write....very touching to me.....i loved it....it brought tears to my eyes....awesome job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: STABBED! (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 9th March 2006 @ 11:53:58 AM AEST
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This was a really good poem. I can relate. I liked the way that this was written and you expressed yourself brillantly. Great poem.

take care
christina

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