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Array ( [sid] => 71893 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => twisted toughts with a twist [time] => 2004-11-17 02:47:57 [hometext] => crazyness insane feelings.......wrote it a while back [bodytext] => they smoked acid
nothing lasted
its not real
my eggs are plastic
what did i do last night?
sold my brain
i crased it
broke brain
a ticket to the insane
sit back and watch the show
nobody saw it but i swear it snowed
child hood memories of g.i. joe's
feeling twisted
damn i'm thoed
back in tha flood
u stomped on it kid
this sacks a dud
i'm in 2 places at once
or i wish i was
let me try it
ok, go .....
o.g.'s we do it right
hittin those killa highs
the devils we summon
most don't see this dark side
the thoughts, the situation
the crazy revalations
the lack of sleep, the rushes
the reality vacations
comming down so hard
i've been so many places
my seritonan's mad at me
he packed his suitcases
alice in wonder land
depression setting in
boxing with temtation
but he always seems to win
its like fighting a grown man
and your olny 10
born again, win
lose your close friends
the power of forgiveness is as if u never sinned
hold up high ur chin
2 places at once
the good and the bad
choose to be happy
or screwed up and sad
their i did it, so i'm not crazy
goodbye their people
i'll end this with another
doopty do dangle
dippa doe dee
darn it
darrren's demons
damaged da drugs
daredevil dummys
doing dangerous deeds
destracted, decieved
dinkleberry dope
would u like 2 get high
i think i'd say nope
after reading this
its hard
but their is still hope!! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 293 [topic] => 66 [informant] => timmy2scoops [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
twisted toughts with a twist

Contributed by timmy2scoops on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 02:47:57 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



they smoked acid
nothing lasted
its not real
my eggs are plastic
what did i do last night?
sold my brain
i crased it
broke brain
a ticket to the insane
sit back and watch the show
nobody saw it but i swear it snowed
child hood memories of g.i. joe's
feeling twisted
damn i'm thoed
back in tha flood
u stomped on it kid
this sacks a dud
i'm in 2 places at once
or i wish i was
let me try it
ok, go .....
o.g.'s we do it right
hittin those killa highs
the devils we summon
most don't see this dark side
the thoughts, the situation
the crazy revalations
the lack of sleep, the rushes
the reality vacations
comming down so hard
i've been so many places
my seritonan's mad at me
he packed his suitcases
alice in wonder land
depression setting in
boxing with temtation
but he always seems to win
its like fighting a grown man
and your olny 10
born again, win
lose your close friends
the power of forgiveness is as if u never sinned
hold up high ur chin
2 places at once
the good and the bad
choose to be happy
or screwed up and sad
their i did it, so i'm not crazy
goodbye their people
i'll end this with another
doopty do dangle
dippa doe dee
darn it
darrren's demons
damaged da drugs
daredevil dummys
doing dangerous deeds
destracted, decieved
dinkleberry dope
would u like 2 get high
i think i'd say nope
after reading this
its hard
but their is still hope!!




Copyright © timmy2scoops ... [ 2004-11-17 02:47:57]
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Re: twisted toughts with a twist (User Rating: 1 )
by JT on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:09:37 AM AEST
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nice write. I've had my head in that place before. makes for some interesting poems and lyrics.
-jt-


Re: twisted toughts with a twist (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 06:39:44 AM AEST
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Gotto love those "reality vacations"! I liked this one, it was killer. I hate acid... One time well,i won'tget into ti, lets just say my moms bathrobe grew fur... Nice write, captured it nicely.




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