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Array ( [sid] => 71876 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Break Down [time] => 2004-11-16 22:07:20 [hometext] => this isnt as good as my first poem i think im one of those one hit wonders. anyways write back if u wanna talk. [bodytext] =>

Consumed by it, haunted by it and scared by it.
This pain reliever I thought of has drawn me in
I am officially addicted now,
I am an addict.
Talked about only in reference of being insane
the one thing everyone fears
is now my only way of life
people don't understand the wanting or needing I have for it
It's almost like I have no life now
I am a prisoner to cutting
this addiction will not stop and I fear it
I have givin in to its calling
there is no cure I have found out the hard way
I am all alone in this
On my own
But there is one thing
one way of escaping all of this madness
I don't see how I could have missed this before
It's so simple
I have finally figured out why this way of life has chosen me
to help me
to instantly take my pain away to a place where only the two of us, my blade and I exist
the result of him may not be pretty,
but it's the only way I have of expressing my feelings
the only way to let it all out
no one suspects the quiet ones like me
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Break Down

Contributed by humboldtsweetie33 on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:07:20 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles





Consumed by it, haunted by it and scared by it.
This pain reliever I thought of has drawn me in
I am officially addicted now,
I am an addict.
Talked about only in reference of being insane
the one thing everyone fears
is now my only way of life
people don't understand the wanting or needing I have for it
It's almost like I have no life now
I am a prisoner to cutting
this addiction will not stop and I fear it
I have givin in to its calling
there is no cure I have found out the hard way
I am all alone in this
On my own
But there is one thing
one way of escaping all of this madness
I don't see how I could have missed this before
It's so simple
I have finally figured out why this way of life has chosen me
to help me
to instantly take my pain away to a place where only the two of us, my blade and I exist
the result of him may not be pretty,
but it's the only way I have of expressing my feelings
the only way to let it all out
no one suspects the quiet ones like me




Copyright © humboldtsweetie33 ... [ 2004-11-16 22:07:20]
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Re: Break Down (User Rating: 1 )
by sandy_poetrygodslove on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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Have you noticed that everyone who thinks the way you do end up cutting. someone starts to do it and says try it.. like a drug you know. or a habit. so hard to break. Jesus not only died on the cross for our sins.. by his stripes we are healed. Maybe a outlet you havent tried yet. funny I have this feeling that I need talk hard to you instead of softness. you better watch it my friend your getting to dang close to a end. reach out to him and let him take your hand. let him wipe away those tears let him love you like he can let him show you a new way and a new beginning.. there is nothing he cant do.. all things are possible through him.... take care... sandy by the way.. love the way you wrote the poem.. you have agift.


Re: Break Down (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldthunny17 on Friday, 26th November 2004 @ 01:56:42 PM AEST
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Maddy u know I'm trying to help u-- THERE are other ways of expressing your feelings besides cutting-- LUV YA TONS!!




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