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Array ( [sid] => 71860 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Driver [time] => 2004-11-16 20:32:27 [hometext] => this didnt really happen to me [bodytext] =>
See if you can deal being the driver of a horrible car accident
So many things distracting you,you cant pay attention,
and you remember that party you were just at,and you being dared to chug 5 glasses of vodka.
Right next to you is your boyfriend or best friend, he/she is talking to you and you try to pay attention but you just cant
Intill "POW", you hit someone or something so hard, everything goes blank.
All you can remember is hearing sirens and flaching lights,but before you blank out you definrtly remember that sound of a broken neck or someone crashing right into a window,intill the next day when you wake up in the hospital,with a broken arm ant two broken ribs,and you here that you boyfriend or best friend is DEAD
Remember that you killed them and there is no going back
and its all your falt cause you were drunk driving
And then the car you ran into,there was a 76 year old women in that car you collided in,look at
all the weight on your shoulders.
I couldnt handle it,can you.

Dont drink and drive
You could save a lot of peoples lives

Thank You






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Driver

Contributed by YouMakeMeThrowUp-A-Little on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:32:27 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief




See if you can deal being the driver of a horrible car accident
So many things distracting you,you cant pay attention,
and you remember that party you were just at,and you being dared to chug 5 glasses of vodka.
Right next to you is your boyfriend or best friend, he/she is talking to you and you try to pay attention but you just cant
Intill "POW", you hit someone or something so hard, everything goes blank.
All you can remember is hearing sirens and flaching lights,but before you blank out you definrtly remember that sound of a broken neck or someone crashing right into a window,intill the next day when you wake up in the hospital,with a broken arm ant two broken ribs,and you here that you boyfriend or best friend is DEAD
Remember that you killed them and there is no going back
and its all your falt cause you were drunk driving
And then the car you ran into,there was a 76 year old women in that car you collided in,look at
all the weight on your shoulders.
I couldnt handle it,can you.

Dont drink and drive
You could save a lot of peoples lives

Thank You






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Re: Driver (User Rating: 1 )
by Clementine on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 12:14:10 AM AEST
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this is wonderfully written with a great message.

-clem




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