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Cold Night
Contributed by
luinil
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Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:00:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Your voice cuts into me
So coldly my ears bleed
And I can feel you by my side
Now nothing’s left of me
Still you won’t set me free
Dug your knife deeper while I cried
Take what you want from me
I only wish to sleep
Lie to me till I cannot see
Never awaken me
I’m gone now, let me be
Find some place else to plant your seed
Come lay beside of me
And listen to me speak
My secrets creep into your eyes
I’ll bind you here to me
Where you can never leave
Till all the hope left in you dies
Copyright ©
luinil
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2004-11-16 18:00:18]
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Re: Cold Night
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by witch_derna on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:07:45 PM AEST
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Hate someone alot huh? Good write and I hope they get what they deserve :)
Blessed Be.
MaDonna |
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Re: Cold Night
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by faffeee on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:36:49 PM AEST
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| good write. sad though :( good luck xx |
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Re: Cold Night
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:50:37 PM AEST
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| I can relate to this... this is a great write, Stay Strong. |
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Re: Cold Night
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by pixie on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:27:40 AM AEST
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wow so very powerful, *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Cold Night
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by girish on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:45:47 PM AEST
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| good write. wish to have a sad hugs? |
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