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Is Love Fair
Contributed by
maryetta
on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:47:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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your tears touch me i feel lightheaded
i was not aware your love was so strong
but does that give you freedom to do anything
do you think my love strong to take everything
where does the line be drawn is love fair
i can love with all my heart but choose not
how can one take abuse in the name of love
is that love to hurt the one you say you love
are we even speaking the same language
where does the line be drawn is love fair
it is sad when you have to choose that way
but sometimes you really need to protect your heart
it is after all such a fragile thing and hurts easily
i cant live in a world of pain anymore i just cant
where does the line be drawn is love fair
so i choose to go it alone now and be me again
i wont let anyone play with my heart again
i will go where i want do what i wont freely
and no one will play my heartstrings again
where does the line be drawn is love fair
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maryetta
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2004-11-16 17:47:20] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Is Love Fair
(User Rating: 1 ) by neglected1 on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 07:01:28 PM AEST (User
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Very heart felt.. and a wonderful write.. i found myself stumbling over some verses though... the words seemed to stagger alil.. maybe there could be more flow?? i dont know.. maybe thats just me..
i really enjoyed reading your piece though
you have much talent
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