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Array ( [sid] => 71765 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => unspoken [time] => 2004-11-16 14:03:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A gleam of hope in your unspoken words.
Save me no matter what, I need to know you'll take me away.
When this life isn't worth living and I feel there's nothing left.
You will save me no matter what.
With me it's only ever overcast, sometimes you show me what it's like to see the sky, and I sleep well at night knowing you can.
When no one knows why I've been crying, you see my tears and raise me sympathy and a warm embrace.
When I'm hiding away in my room, sitting behind the door, you open it and shine light into my life once more.
You'll be my everything when I've got nothing at all, and I will love you forever for it. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 190 [topic] => 54 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => happypoetry )

unspoken

Contributed by surge_joebot on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:03:08 PM in AEST
Topic: happypoetry

A gleam of hope in your unspoken words.
Save me no matter what, I need to know you'll take me away.
When this life isn't worth living and I feel there's nothing left.
You will save me no matter what.
With me it's only ever overcast, sometimes you show me what it's like to see the sky, and I sleep well at night knowing you can.
When no one knows why I've been crying, you see my tears and raise me sympathy and a warm embrace.
When I'm hiding away in my room, sitting behind the door, you open it and shine light into my life once more.
You'll be my everything when I've got nothing at all, and I will love you forever for it.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-11-16 14:03:08]
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Re: unspoken (User Rating: 1 )
by Kewi on Friday, 24th February 2006 @ 07:34:59 PM AEST
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I really like this poem. I usually don't like poems written in this format but this one is really good and I like it. It speaks the truth in an understanding way...
...my opinion at least...

Re: unspoken (User Rating: 1 )
by liamleash on Sunday, 27th April 2008 @ 10:51:43 AM AEST
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You'll be my everything when I've got nothing at all, and I will love you forever for it
love that line.
Amazing line to finish on.

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