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Array ( [sid] => 71756 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Just Don't Know What To Do [time] => 2004-11-16 12:48:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I’m shaking inside and it won’t stop.
The feelings inside keep colliding.
I don’t know what to do anymore.
Somebody please save me,
Help me from the pain.
The pain inside of me just keeps swelling.
I don’t know what to do.
I hate the way people criticize me,
I’m sick of it just stop.
You may be joking, but I don’t care.
Can’t you see I’m hurting?
I’m hurting deep inside.
I want to run away, but I don’t know what to do.
I’m unsure, unhappy, and most of all,
I’m depressed.
The littlest things keep getting me upset,
Somebody tell me what to do because
I don’t know what to do.
I’m sick of just sitting and waiting for something
To come to me.
I know I should make something come to me,
But I just don’t know what to do.
I feel like my friends aren’t there for me,
They don’t even call me anymore.
They don’t even know how I feel.
They are suppose to be one of the one’s closest to me,
But they don’t even see.
Worst of all my family doesn’t even see.
I’m just a rebellious teenager.
I want to break down and cry.
I have broken down and cried.
I will break down and cry again.
I want to crawl into my hole and
Never come back up again.
I just don’t know what to do anymore.
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I Just Don't Know What To Do

Contributed by squeeks on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:48:56 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



I’m shaking inside and it won’t stop.
The feelings inside keep colliding.
I don’t know what to do anymore.
Somebody please save me,
Help me from the pain.
The pain inside of me just keeps swelling.
I don’t know what to do.
I hate the way people criticize me,
I’m sick of it just stop.
You may be joking, but I don’t care.
Can’t you see I’m hurting?
I’m hurting deep inside.
I want to run away, but I don’t know what to do.
I’m unsure, unhappy, and most of all,
I’m depressed.
The littlest things keep getting me upset,
Somebody tell me what to do because
I don’t know what to do.
I’m sick of just sitting and waiting for something
To come to me.
I know I should make something come to me,
But I just don’t know what to do.
I feel like my friends aren’t there for me,
They don’t even call me anymore.
They don’t even know how I feel.
They are suppose to be one of the one’s closest to me,
But they don’t even see.
Worst of all my family doesn’t even see.
I’m just a rebellious teenager.
I want to break down and cry.
I have broken down and cried.
I will break down and cry again.
I want to crawl into my hole and
Never come back up again.
I just don’t know what to do anymore.




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Re: I Just Don't Know What To Do (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:50:54 PM AEST
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keep writing and sharing your writes with us, this was emoitonal and pain filled,

also welcome to YPDC , hope you will have many hours of fun on here, *hugs*

pixie xx


Re: I Just Don't Know What To Do (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:38:32 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write.. are you being picked on in school?? i know the feeling its rough but you will get through this trust me .. and if your friends are not there for you then they arent you friends to begin with.. friends stick behind one an other and help eachother .. Hang in there .. you will ge through this..

Peace and hope
JENNI




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