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I am waiting for someone to walk through the door,
But no-one ever does, so alone I dance,
To be happy I’m not even given that chance.

There’s nobody here to admire my dress,
Its seems only the shadows I’m trying to impress,
The music is only present inside my head,
To the rest of the world the tone is dead.

My feet are sore, but dance forever I will,
While there’s blood in my veins I can’t sit still,
I want everyone to know that I am alive,
But my soul just feels like it’s somehow died.

All I do is just spin around & around,
Feel so very exhausted then hit the ground,
Then I get back up & start dancing again,
If I stop then I’ll feel the never ending pain.

Moving about keeps my minds cogs turning,
I don’t want to stop because I’ll feel the burning,
So here I am alone in the secluded ballroom,
The only company I have is my doom & gloom.
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Dancing Alone

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:06:10 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I am sick of dancing alone on the floor,
I am waiting for someone to walk through the door,
But no-one ever does, so alone I dance,
To be happy I’m not even given that chance.

There’s nobody here to admire my dress,
Its seems only the shadows I’m trying to impress,
The music is only present inside my head,
To the rest of the world the tone is dead.

My feet are sore, but dance forever I will,
While there’s blood in my veins I can’t sit still,
I want everyone to know that I am alive,
But my soul just feels like it’s somehow died.

All I do is just spin around & around,
Feel so very exhausted then hit the ground,
Then I get back up & start dancing again,
If I stop then I’ll feel the never ending pain.

Moving about keeps my minds cogs turning,
I don’t want to stop because I’ll feel the burning,
So here I am alone in the secluded ballroom,
The only company I have is my doom & gloom.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-11-16 12:06:10]
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Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:08:47 PM AEST
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very good write once more

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by jonteD on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:35:20 PM AEST
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Dance all night long, the words and the music will be your music, your partner and your lover.

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:55:59 PM AEST
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sad, good write, i enjoyed the read.crow

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:18:21 PM AEST
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wow this is a great write.. its sad but expresses that feeling so well. .I ejoyed this poem.. I have actually felt this way before long ago so i can relate awesome write

Peace and hope
JENNI

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:22:22 PM AEST
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Very intense write so moving so sad. Well written. Your words are a dance for everyone to see. So now you are no longer dancing alone. We all are dancing with you this day.

~~DENNIS~~

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by pander on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:20:22 AM AEST
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This is one of your best writes Pixie. I'm pretty sure we've all had times when we've felt the way you have written about. This is so easy to relate to. I'm sure it will ring true in the hearts of many readers.

Well done once again.

Luv,

Pander
xxxx

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 09:44:28 AM AEST
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Life can be magical Pixie and just when you think your alone another is waiting on the sidelines to make you smile again from the inside out.

You write poetry well.

Kie

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:01:28 AM AEST
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A sad, but beautiful write. The words are very descriptive and the poem has a wonderful rhythum.

Wonderful write
Willofree

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 10:10:10 AM AEST
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The fiddle plays..keep on dancing. If you stop..you'll freeze. I don't know why but this reminds me of that game..musical chairs..do you remember?

Re: Dancing Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by lunartune on Saturday, 20th November 2004 @ 08:54:57 AM AEST
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Really great write. Wow! you have alot of talent. Keep writing. Your stuff rocks!

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