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Array ( [sid] => 71727 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Just relax [time] => 2004-11-16 08:09:25 [hometext] => To me [bodytext] => Close you eyes and think good things,
Tall masted ships and golden rings,
Of white breaking surf upon the sand,
With the one you love, hand in hand.
Just relax.

Remember all the good times not bad,
Things that made you laugh not sad,
People you knew along the way,
Some are your best friends still today.
Just relax.

Green fields, blue skies, the sound of birds,
A loving look, a sweet perfume, perfect words,
Growing up innocent, no sign of hate or war,
Kissing for the first time outside front door.
Just relax.

Being alone, even amongst a crowd,
Switching off when others get too loud,
Smiling to yourself with secrets inside,
A beating heart. a love you have to hide.
Just relax.

Fluffy clouds dancing by, a kissing breeze,
First sign of summer when you sneeze,
A shopping trip, retail therapy,
No cares at all as far as you can see.
Just relax.

Some days are grey, some turn to black,
And tears win and knock you off track,
In your torment crying is no sin,
So long as you fight back hard and win.
For now, just relax.

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Just relax

Contributed by jonteD on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:09:25 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday

Close you eyes and think good things,
Tall masted ships and golden rings,
Of white breaking surf upon the sand,
With the one you love, hand in hand.
Just relax.

Remember all the good times not bad,
Things that made you laugh not sad,
People you knew along the way,
Some are your best friends still today.
Just relax.

Green fields, blue skies, the sound of birds,
A loving look, a sweet perfume, perfect words,
Growing up innocent, no sign of hate or war,
Kissing for the first time outside front door.
Just relax.

Being alone, even amongst a crowd,
Switching off when others get too loud,
Smiling to yourself with secrets inside,
A beating heart. a love you have to hide.
Just relax.

Fluffy clouds dancing by, a kissing breeze,
First sign of summer when you sneeze,
A shopping trip, retail therapy,
No cares at all as far as you can see.
Just relax.

Some days are grey, some turn to black,
And tears win and knock you off track,
In your torment crying is no sin,
So long as you fight back hard and win.
For now, just relax.

Copyright © jonteD ... [ 2004-11-16 08:09:25]
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Re: Just relax (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:20:58 AM AEST
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tat is such sound advice Jonte, a great write, I should take heed of your advice,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Just relax (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:23:21 AM AEST
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Beautiful and filled with such strength. It flows perfectly and is written to perfection. Great write.

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Just relax (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 10:45:45 AM AEST
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So beautiful & truthful. I enjoyed this very much. It has put me into a nice place just for this moment. Thanks for sharing.
~Catalina~

Re: Just relax (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:14:53 PM AEST
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Ahhh.... May I join you?

My eyes are closed...
I am thinking good things,
Smiling a secret smile....
I'm relaxed..

Great write..... One of my new favs...
Thank you..
Hugs
LL...

Re: Just relax (User Rating: 1 )
by shattered_heart on Monday, 29th November 2004 @ 07:34:31 PM AEST
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I love your poem. It inspires me to stand another day and try to be strong against the things that bring me down in my day. Your a very good inspirational writer. Good write.

- Rachelle

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