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to better my life now,
I know what and why they are
but simply don't know how.
Is there something I must realize,
or something I must learn,
I'm so confused with all of this
should I give it such concern.
Support I surely need right now,
with patience till that day,
I can finally look back and say
I figured out the way. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 303 [topic] => 21 [informant] => RomanticSoul [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Change

Contributed by RomanticSoul on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:16:36 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

There are many things I'd like to change
to better my life now,
I know what and why they are
but simply don't know how.
Is there something I must realize,
or something I must learn,
I'm so confused with all of this
should I give it such concern.
Support I surely need right now,
with patience till that day,
I can finally look back and say
I figured out the way.

Copyright © RomanticSoul ... [ 2004-11-16 00:16:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:01:29 AM AEST
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this is a very refreshing, and open. I have no advise, take time.. good work Crow

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by maggie36 on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:33:39 AM AEST
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Very nice poem, and I think alot of people
feel the same way, who's to say whats right and whats wrong, the only advise I can give is: Live, Love and Learn from your mistakes.

Maggie

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:36:03 AM AEST
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Interesting poem, makes one think and look at it from their perspective too. Great Write

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:30:11 AM AEST
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That was one good poem, good job.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: Change (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:01:16 PM AEST
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Noone's like you!!! My sister, my role model,
my secret keeper!! We will make our changes in life and in a few years we'll be lookin back as if it were a dream!! I love you!
were both poets and didn't know it!!!
4 life D.$.

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