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the pain and searing anger within,
you might not be so fast to voice them.
If you knew how sad your looks make me feel,
like a dozen dead daisies,
you might turn your eyes the other way.
If you knew how loud your whispers echo
inside my head, my heart trembling,
you might take heed to quiet them.
If you knew what I'd do for one smile,
move mountains and swim the oceans,
you might try to be happier.
If you knew how soft your touch is,
wiping from my face these worries,
you might not hit me so hard.
If you knew how much you meant to me,
the stars and heaven couldn't compensate,
maybe you'd know how much I really love you.

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If you knew...

Contributed by theraven on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:21:34 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

If you knew what your thoughts put me through,
the pain and searing anger within,
you might not be so fast to voice them.
If you knew how sad your looks make me feel,
like a dozen dead daisies,
you might turn your eyes the other way.
If you knew how loud your whispers echo
inside my head, my heart trembling,
you might take heed to quiet them.
If you knew what I'd do for one smile,
move mountains and swim the oceans,
you might try to be happier.
If you knew how soft your touch is,
wiping from my face these worries,
you might not hit me so hard.
If you knew how much you meant to me,
the stars and heaven couldn't compensate,
maybe you'd know how much I really love you.

-The Raven-

Copyright © theraven ... [ 2004-11-15 22:21:34]
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Re: If you knew... (User Rating: 1 )
by shadowsofmyheart on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:40:20 PM AEST
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very emotional and VERY!!!!!!! vivad and i can see what your tlaking about. what im not so sure about is where you stand on what your talking about, if its an unrequited love or oblivios....?

Re: If you knew... (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:30:19 PM AEST
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This Moved Me!! I have felt this way so many times in life in my childhood! I get the feeling it could be about a girl friend or boy friend or mom or dad!! Hmm... one thing i am sure of is that i'm not alone in this world with the way i feel inside!! Keep writing always!! ~D.$.~

Re: If you knew... (User Rating: 1 )
by RomanticSoul on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 12:23:24 AM AEST
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Very emotional, the hurt and sadness you express in these words

Re: If you knew... (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:04:28 PM AEST
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this is an awesome poem...i liked it alot...i even feel as though i could relate....excellent job...i loved it

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: If you knew... (User Rating: 1 )
by Catalina on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:10:13 PM AEST
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A totally wonderful masterpeice. Thanks so much for sharing.
~Catalina~

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