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Sir, To Me
Contributed by
jaeann
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Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:51:15 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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......when there isn't any sign
and there hasn't been a call
my eyes no longer shine
and I stumble toward the fall
wanna feel so fine
need to feel so tall
crave that time of mine
on his energy I'll enthrall
conversation without a line
from a man that has the gall
everywhere there is a sign
to just let him inside my wall
aching to seem like a nine
and walk the lighted hall
so I'm waiting on that line
with bated breath for the call.....
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jaeann
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2004-11-15 18:51:15]
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Re: Sir, To Me
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by Crow on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:29:11 PM AEST
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| Damn I like your work! Crow |
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Re: Sir, To Me
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by afterdark on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:58:07 PM AEST
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| very moving |
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Re: Sir, To Me
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by bobotheclown on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:29:40 PM AEST
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I liked the line structure and rhythm of this
poem. I enjoyed it especially because I too
am waiting for a call... although not from a guy
lol. Good poem...
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Sir, To Me
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 01:31:39 PM AEST
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I loved the way you wrote this.....
If he doesnt call, he's a fool.
Roses
Larry |
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