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Array ( [sid] => 71617 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Bleeding White Angels [time] => 2004-11-15 16:29:02 [hometext] => (A negative view on vamps even though i luv em) [bodytext] => The sharp edges of your fangs are glistening
While white Angels stand listening

They are so pure, so light, so clean
Looking upon your leftover death scenes

They want to burn you,
to ignite your pale skin

They want to cleanse you,
Of your blood red evil sins

You notice their stares
Hardly give a care

For you slink up behind with stealth so elite
And plant in your fangs....your bite mark so neat

And now they have turned from innocent creatures
To the very thing that has haunted their features

Poor little Angels,
God's own peaceful whispers
Corrupted with hatred.....now death are their blisters

The vampire, so proud
Hisses aloud

But in the end, the demon knows
that God will prevail
And strike a champion's pose [comments] => 4 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Inevitable [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Bleeding White Angels

Contributed by Inevitable on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 04:29:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The sharp edges of your fangs are glistening
While white Angels stand listening

They are so pure, so light, so clean
Looking upon your leftover death scenes

They want to burn you,
to ignite your pale skin

They want to cleanse you,
Of your blood red evil sins

You notice their stares
Hardly give a care

For you slink up behind with stealth so elite
And plant in your fangs....your bite mark so neat

And now they have turned from innocent creatures
To the very thing that has haunted their features

Poor little Angels,
God's own peaceful whispers
Corrupted with hatred.....now death are their blisters

The vampire, so proud
Hisses aloud

But in the end, the demon knows
that God will prevail
And strike a champion's pose

Copyright © Inevitable ... [ 2004-11-15 16:29:02]
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Re: Bleeding White Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:40:05 PM AEST
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very dark and well written..very creative keep up the great writing

Re: Bleeding White Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenbylove130 on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:59:16 PM AEST
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i absolutely love vampires and although as you said this is a negative view of them, its still awsome. the whole vampire thing as always facinated me ever since i was a little girl. this was a great write
~much love~
~mandi~

Re: Bleeding White Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:02:57 PM AEST
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very vivid and well written I thought with a
good message as well.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Bleeding White Angels (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 02:51:28 PM AEST
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i love vampires..this is a great write....i like it alot...great job

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

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