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As the razor spreads my skin
each slice goes deeper and deeper

ONE!!!!
TWO!!!!
THREE!!
FOUR!!!

Each one longer than before.

The blood flows red but then turns to black
As is my soul blackened empty.

FIVE!!!
SIX!!!!
SEVEN!!
EIGHT!!

Cut's to my arm's and leg's.

A pool of blood lies at my feet
It's so beautiful watching it flow.

NINE!!!!
TEN!!!!!
ELEVEN!!
TWELVE!!

My head is spinning.

Have to sit down can't feel my face.

THIRTEEN!!
FOURTEEN!!
FIFTEEN!!!

Each one deeper than the one before.

SIXTEEN!!!

How many can I do
Before I begin A new life.

SEVENTEEN!!
EIGHTEEN!!!

OH MY GOD
it feels so good.

NINETEEN!!
TWENTY!!!!

I'm done can't go on.

The pool has become a pond
of black and red blood
finely it's DONE.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN
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HOW MANY CUTS

Contributed by lemmen on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:14:45 PM in AEST
Topic: sarcasticpoetry

The blood drips from my flesh
As the razor spreads my skin
each slice goes deeper and deeper

ONE!!!!
TWO!!!!
THREE!!
FOUR!!!

Each one longer than before.

The blood flows red but then turns to black
As is my soul blackened empty.

FIVE!!!
SIX!!!!
SEVEN!!
EIGHT!!

Cut's to my arm's and leg's.

A pool of blood lies at my feet
It's so beautiful watching it flow.

NINE!!!!
TEN!!!!!
ELEVEN!!
TWELVE!!

My head is spinning.

Have to sit down can't feel my face.

THIRTEEN!!
FOURTEEN!!
FIFTEEN!!!

Each one deeper than the one before.

SIXTEEN!!!

How many can I do
Before I begin A new life.

SEVENTEEN!!
EIGHTEEN!!!

OH MY GOD
it feels so good.

NINETEEN!!
TWENTY!!!!

I'm done can't go on.

The pool has become a pond
of black and red blood
finely it's DONE.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-11-15 13:14:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: HOW MANY CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:12:12 PM AEST
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run blood run this craps done

Re: HOW MANY CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:16:17 AM AEST
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wow dennis, this is kinda....
I can't say.....
but it was a good write.

*~givingin~*

Re: HOW MANY CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:20:02 AM AEST
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This was a very good write Dennis, I enjoy reading your poems, It make sme realize that what I go through can be solved, and that there's no need for me to feel alone. So thank-you for writing the poems that you do, I may not be able to relate to all of them, but they are all good none-the-less

*~Alicia~*

Re: HOW MANY CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 01:42:11 PM AEST
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Again another good write. I can respect this becuz I know what it does to a person and how it feels. It's like a rush of a poisoned thrill that comes out of now where and you get a feel for it and then it is hard to stop but you just have to keep at it. I know how hard it is to try and stop but it is like once you start you can't, there is something in you that doesn't wannna give that up. Deep write and thankyou for writing it.
* hugs *
Blessed be
~ :: darkangeleyes57 :: ~

Re: HOW MANY CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jen54 on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 11:43:27 AM AEST
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wow!
I can't find the words
good write!!

Re: HOW MANY CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 09:47:03 AM AEST
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I enjoyed this poem very well and it's one I can relate to very much....well excellent write keep it up

Re: HOW MANY CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Sunday, 7th May 2006 @ 05:26:14 PM AEST
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wow this peom is so good i can't find the words to tell you how good it is keep up the good wrtting

Tiff

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