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Array ( [sid] => 71566 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Taking of Another [time] => 2004-11-15 11:21:38 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Rape is an ugly act, The Taking of Another
Little pride left in tact, Feeling like I'm going to smother.
Sworn to not tell, If I know what's good for me
My life will surely turn to Hell, he said "Just wait and see!"
No feeling of being clean in sight, and no sense of being wanted
Not able to sleep at night, Because my dreams are haunted.
People make me promise to tell, But they don't understand my fear
They say to make him feel my pain, But right now I need a kind ear.
I want to put this in the past, To even forget it ever happened
Karma will make his pain last, he'll pay threefold, be misfortuned.
Everyone asks if I'm alright, Right now I need normalcy
Just to be held tight, For me and my love to have intimacy.
I NEED TO FEEL WANTED!!
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The Taking of Another

Contributed by witch_derna on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:21:38 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Rape is an ugly act, The Taking of Another
Little pride left in tact, Feeling like I'm going to smother.
Sworn to not tell, If I know what's good for me
My life will surely turn to Hell, he said "Just wait and see!"
No feeling of being clean in sight, and no sense of being wanted
Not able to sleep at night, Because my dreams are haunted.
People make me promise to tell, But they don't understand my fear
They say to make him feel my pain, But right now I need a kind ear.
I want to put this in the past, To even forget it ever happened
Karma will make his pain last, he'll pay threefold, be misfortuned.
Everyone asks if I'm alright, Right now I need normalcy
Just to be held tight, For me and my love to have intimacy.
I NEED TO FEEL WANTED!!

Copyright © witch_derna ... [ 2004-11-15 11:21:38]
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Re: The Taking of Another (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:23:27 AM AEST
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that was a pained write, I am sorry *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx

Re: The Taking of Another (User Rating: 1 )
by momentoftruth on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:24:37 PM AEST
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How terrible....a very moving poem.

Re: The Taking of Another (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:43:24 PM AEST
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I know of these things. I hear you cry at night. And i sware by all the powers within me no one shall ever make you fear again. You are forever wanted. You are forever loved.

~~LOVE DENNIS~~

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