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Array ( [sid] => 71563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deadly Game Of Love [time] => 2004-11-15 11:07:16 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I can see
but yet I'm blind
What I seek
I can't find

I seek for love
but yet I hide
The last time I loved
my heart was denied

I am missing out
on what life has to offer
my heart is stuck
aching for her

I try to move on
but then I take a step back
Everytime someone starts to care
I have a panic attack

I look at the new girl
wondering if it will happen again
So I hold back
and my darkness grows within

The only way out is death or suicide
but they are one in the same
So I load the gun
and then I play the game

The gun has six holes
in every other one a bullet
I feel the trigger under my finger
Then I pull it

*click*

A final ending
a single bullet can give
such a hard life
with no urge to live

I open the chamber
and give it a spin
This isn't a game
that I want to win
I put the barrel to my head
then I pull again

*Blam!*

My death is slow
but something I needed
With all my failures
I finally succeeded

But I didn't die alone
this was a game for two
As I faded I grabbed her hand
and she whispered "I love you."

We died together
with love in our heart
now the two of us
will never be apart

Now we're together
far above
We are both casulties
in the deadly game of love [comments] => 4 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 36 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Deadly Game Of Love

Contributed by crash on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:07:16 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I can see
but yet I'm blind
What I seek
I can't find

I seek for love
but yet I hide
The last time I loved
my heart was denied

I am missing out
on what life has to offer
my heart is stuck
aching for her

I try to move on
but then I take a step back
Everytime someone starts to care
I have a panic attack

I look at the new girl
wondering if it will happen again
So I hold back
and my darkness grows within

The only way out is death or suicide
but they are one in the same
So I load the gun
and then I play the game

The gun has six holes
in every other one a bullet
I feel the trigger under my finger
Then I pull it

*click*

A final ending
a single bullet can give
such a hard life
with no urge to live

I open the chamber
and give it a spin
This isn't a game
that I want to win
I put the barrel to my head
then I pull again

*Blam!*

My death is slow
but something I needed
With all my failures
I finally succeeded

But I didn't die alone
this was a game for two
As I faded I grabbed her hand
and she whispered "I love you."

We died together
with love in our heart
now the two of us
will never be apart

Now we're together
far above
We are both casulties
in the deadly game of love

Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-11-15 11:07:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Deadly Game Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 11:09:07 AM AEST
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wow that was powerful and sad, very sad,

pixie xx

Re: Deadly Game Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by lil_angel on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:35:02 PM AEST
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Wow this is great! Very good job!

Re: Deadly Game Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by sid_the_tampon_fairy on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 06:49:53 PM AEST
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Beautifully dark...I love it...speaks to me. Thank You.
*hugs*
Sid

Re: Deadly Game Of Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaos_is_apon_us on Wednesday, 2nd February 2005 @ 04:14:57 PM AEST
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I was really feeling this poem, with the denial hitting directly, then you suprised me with your love dying with you. great poem!
Better dayz
~jace~

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