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Array ( [sid] => 71561 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I hate... [time] => 2004-11-15 10:32:15 [hometext] => This here Luke is for you. I dont hate you as much as this poem makes it seem, I love you and always will. but please just understand where I am coming from, please stop hurting me. [bodytext] => I hate the way you look at me,
And the way you stand and stare,
I hate how you have a lame excuse,
For almost never being there.
I hate it when you always drink,
And always raise your voice,
I hate it most when you call me her,
You’re leaving me no choice.
I hate it when you turn your back,
And mumble ‘not tonight’
I hate it when you go away,
And then turn your mobile off all night.
I hate it when you sometimes lie,
And keep your secrets deep,
I hate it when you don’t want sex,
Or lie away from me to sleep.
I hate the way you make me feel,
When fit girls give you attention,
I hate the fact my love is real,
And the way you snub my affection.
I hate it when you get me mad,
And when you make me cry,
I hate it when I wake up sad,
Those days I just want to die.
I hate it when you make me laugh,
And the way you read my mind,
I hate that annoying music you play,
And the way you’re always kind.
I hate the fact I don’t hate you,
And how I never will,
Its just you ***** me off,
You make me want to kill.
I hate it that you’re good in bed,
When you feel the need,
I hate it when you’re in my head,
And make my thoughts seem easy to read.
I hate the fact I love you,
And how you’re some what right,
I hate it that I’ll always love you,
Forever from morning to night.

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I hate...

Contributed by my_pain_my_sorrows on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 10:32:15 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I hate the way you look at me,
And the way you stand and stare,
I hate how you have a lame excuse,
For almost never being there.
I hate it when you always drink,
And always raise your voice,
I hate it most when you call me her,
You’re leaving me no choice.
I hate it when you turn your back,
And mumble ‘not tonight’
I hate it when you go away,
And then turn your mobile off all night.
I hate it when you sometimes lie,
And keep your secrets deep,
I hate it when you don’t want sex,
Or lie away from me to sleep.
I hate the way you make me feel,
When fit girls give you attention,
I hate the fact my love is real,
And the way you snub my affection.
I hate it when you get me mad,
And when you make me cry,
I hate it when I wake up sad,
Those days I just want to die.
I hate it when you make me laugh,
And the way you read my mind,
I hate that annoying music you play,
And the way you’re always kind.
I hate the fact I don’t hate you,
And how I never will,
Its just you ***** me off,
You make me want to kill.
I hate it that you’re good in bed,
When you feel the need,
I hate it when you’re in my head,
And make my thoughts seem easy to read.
I hate the fact I love you,
And how you’re some what right,
I hate it that I’ll always love you,
Forever from morning to night.





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Re: I hate... (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:07:52 PM AEST
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this was very good. almost amazing.
I can relate to everything in this poem,
you're not the only one who hurts because of those things.
5 out of 5

BS x x x


Re: I hate... (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 09:58:53 AM AEST
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this is so very sad I totaly understand every word. This poem captured your emotions well. From personal experience Ill say in time your love for this person will wither away one cant continue on in life being made to feel as he is doing to you then one day you will wake up look around and say what am I doing here then he wont be so important to you anymore. Im sorry that your going through this.
Hugs
Michelle


Re: I hate... (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Wednesday, 24th November 2004 @ 10:48:46 AM AEST
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so sad...i would hate all of that also...we can't chose who we love...and we can't really change them...hopefully if you show this poem to him then he'd at least think about it...'cause your hurting, hurting deep deep within and you need him!
good luck hun...

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summer




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