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[aid] => mick
[title] => So Little Left of Your Heart
[time] => 2004-11-14 23:26:02
[hometext] => My love life is a crime scene.......please comment....thanx!
[bodytext] => Have you ever had your heart broken so bad
The whole world could hear it shatter?
You sit there watching him
And nothing else seems to matter
Your bright blue eyes are filled with tears
But you can’t let him see
The pain and hurt held deep inside
So from the room you quickly flee
You know that your not ready
To let go of what you had
But the pain is tearing you apart
And your always so damn sad
Now he’s with your best friend
And she doesn’t seem to care
About the pain she causes you
Why does this have to be so unfair
Your screwing yourself over
Your refusing to move on
There’s just so little left of your heart
And soon it will be gone
Yeah, I know this feeling
I love him way too much
Id give absolutely anything
For just one more touch
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[informant] => CrimsonTears
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[ratings] => 3
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So Little Left of Your Heart
Contributed by
CrimsonTears
on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 11:26:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Have you ever had your heart broken so bad
The whole world could hear it shatter?
You sit there watching him
And nothing else seems to matter
Your bright blue eyes are filled with tears
But you can’t let him see
The pain and hurt held deep inside
So from the room you quickly flee
You know that your not ready
To let go of what you had
But the pain is tearing you apart
And your always so damn sad
Now he’s with your best friend
And she doesn’t seem to care
About the pain she causes you
Why does this have to be so unfair
Your screwing yourself over
Your refusing to move on
There’s just so little left of your heart
And soon it will be gone
Yeah, I know this feeling
I love him way too much
Id give absolutely anything
For just one more touch
Copyright ©
CrimsonTears
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2004-11-14 23:26:02]
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by Clementine on
Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 11:31:14 PM AEST
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| how sad!...im sorry that you have to feel that kind of pain, but it helped you write a wonderful poem...great write. |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:00:39 AM AEST
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| great job...just a little word of incouragement from someone who was once in your shoes, it always comes back to the ones who cause the pain. so if your best friend has him. she/he is really no friend at all. and when it all goes sour for them who will they call? |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 12:32:46 AM AEST
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| a feeling we all know, I think I may have even been the cause of it once. |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by girish on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 01:09:01 AM AEST
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you have given the sadness a full picture i have just started writing love poems. all i have submitted are life`s virtues poems. i had written one like this yesterday but will be submitting today.
girish |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by a_bear on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 02:10:59 AM AEST
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| Oh yes..been there, done that. Think of this way: you're lucky enough to have blue eyes.. great poem.. |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by pixie on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:29:44 AM AEST
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awww this is really sad, very emotional poem, *hugs*
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by blowfish_jane on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 06:02:02 AM AEST
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Wow this poem just made me cry, i so know the feeling of this. Lovely poem.
Hugs,
Jane |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:55:48 AM AEST
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| Very emotional poem, let go and see how happy you can be. see my poem "Never There".............Mike |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by surge_joebot on
Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 03:36:28 PM AEST
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very very sad, well written
cheers
Demelza |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by OnAngelswings on
Sunday, 21st November 2004 @ 09:11:14 PM AEST
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| very sad...but letting go is something we must all do sometimes...I'm sorry you hurt so much....Shari |
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Re: So Little Left of Your Heart
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by Black_Rose on
Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 07:30:45 PM AEST
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| My old boyfriend and I broke up and got back together three times before one of my best friends (the one girl who I turned to for help, comfort, and advice at this suicidal time in my life) lied to my face, went behind my back, and started dating him. They broke up a few months later, and he came running back to me...desperate, I suppose. He told me how much he missed me and that he'd fallen back in love with me; and as I'd never stopped loving him, I was esctatic. ... A week later he was dating another one of my friends. Now I'm not even bothering to try and mend my heart this time, and I'd kill for one last chance, too. Anyway, I guess what I'm trying to say is that I know the feeling, too. Sucks, huh? |
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