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Array ( [sid] => 71515 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Apathy [time] => 2004-11-14 21:09:39 [hometext] => A bit of angst, a bit of sadness, alot of teenage poetry. [bodytext] => I'll never be mistaken
For someone really beautiful.
The girls say they are taken
By someone rich and powerful.
I'm just a big nobody
Who has nowhere to go to.
You're my only somebody
But I've got nothing to show you.
I've become so out of it
That I just space out all the time.
My idea bulb is dimly lit
And I'm asleep from ten to nine.
Life is just one pointless bore
Without a rhyme or a reason
It even feels like such a chore
To watch the changing seasons.
My apathy is killing me,
Choking out my weakened soul.
The empathy is still in me,
Preventing me from being whole.
I need to change, be stronger
And wake up from this vision.
Please stay with me longer
Until I make my decision. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 48 [informant] => luna_mica [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Apathy

Contributed by luna_mica on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:09:39 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I'll never be mistaken
For someone really beautiful.
The girls say they are taken
By someone rich and powerful.
I'm just a big nobody
Who has nowhere to go to.
You're my only somebody
But I've got nothing to show you.
I've become so out of it
That I just space out all the time.
My idea bulb is dimly lit
And I'm asleep from ten to nine.
Life is just one pointless bore
Without a rhyme or a reason
It even feels like such a chore
To watch the changing seasons.
My apathy is killing me,
Choking out my weakened soul.
The empathy is still in me,
Preventing me from being whole.
I need to change, be stronger
And wake up from this vision.
Please stay with me longer
Until I make my decision.

Copyright © luna_mica ... [ 2004-11-14 21:09:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Apathy (User Rating: 1 )
by EverlastingDawn on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:12:26 PM AEST
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I really like the poem. Though I think it needs a little help making it flow better.

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