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Array ( [sid] => 71494 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deceiving pleasure [time] => 2004-11-14 18:36:08 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I would climb over the highest highs
In the darkest of nights
Fight away the haunting remains
That is lurking amidst
Fall into the deepest crevasses
And pray for a wish

Cross over murky waters
Hint of disease in ever stride
Sores and blisters begin to form
Facet of pliable components
Stuck in this gummy muck
Disillusioned with such rancid tang

Endanger myself in these forested areas
Nibbled and gnawed on by unseen creatures
Ferocious din becoming sweet hums to my ears
All my assurance in a frail, splintered, aged twig
Closure of eyes won’t approach
Sleepless nights become irresistible

Stagger through the dessert
With no remnant of water
Only my eyes filled with tears
Hallucinate your name/face
Trying to make my way through
Breathing for a sense of direction

Undergo the most mind-boggling pain
Fall upon my knees
Looking for special things inside of me
Having every part of my brain picked at
Blood rushing out from distress
I’m still smiling brokenly

I would be chewed up and spit out
More than a thousand times
Just to see one perfect scene
To belong in your eyes
Just one last time
Creating a fulfilled me
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Deceiving pleasure

Contributed by neglected1 on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:36:08 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I would climb over the highest highs
In the darkest of nights
Fight away the haunting remains
That is lurking amidst
Fall into the deepest crevasses
And pray for a wish

Cross over murky waters
Hint of disease in ever stride
Sores and blisters begin to form
Facet of pliable components
Stuck in this gummy muck
Disillusioned with such rancid tang

Endanger myself in these forested areas
Nibbled and gnawed on by unseen creatures
Ferocious din becoming sweet hums to my ears
All my assurance in a frail, splintered, aged twig
Closure of eyes won’t approach
Sleepless nights become irresistible

Stagger through the dessert
With no remnant of water
Only my eyes filled with tears
Hallucinate your name/face
Trying to make my way through
Breathing for a sense of direction

Undergo the most mind-boggling pain
Fall upon my knees
Looking for special things inside of me
Having every part of my brain picked at
Blood rushing out from distress
I’m still smiling brokenly

I would be chewed up and spit out
More than a thousand times
Just to see one perfect scene
To belong in your eyes
Just one last time
Creating a fulfilled me




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Re: Deceiving pleasure (User Rating: 1 )
by a_bear on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 06:48:10 PM AEST
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I don't know why..it isn't the poetry I'm sure..but I couldn't concentrate..I'll come back on a better day..but I did stop and wanted you to know~

chewed up..a spit out?


Re: Deceiving pleasure (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 07:10:16 AM AEST
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Wow. Thats all I can say... this poem really got to me. All of the feelings and emoptions are written down in clear detail, I reallly love this poem, this is one that I can relly relate to.

*~Alicia~*




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