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Array ( [sid] => 71477 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Simply laying lonely [time] => 2004-11-14 17:10:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Dancing together in the flickering candle lights glow
Exchange of plentiful kisses
Discovering each other like never before

Oh, what a perfect night this has been
You laying next to me
Our limbs entagled together

I'm sure a thousand words were said
But truly only three captured my heart
I love you, those of which meant the most

Running my fingers through your hair
As you tell me a story
Something i will never forget

You pulled out a piece of string
And made me hold onto one end
You went on selling yourself to me

I was already sold the first time i met you
You went on saying how your emotions are thin just like the string
But your a good man

'I want to be the one inside of you
To come home to every night
Eventually have your children

A family to call our own
Even when things are shaky
We will come out on top

I just love you so much
So with this symbol that i recognize myself with
Will you marry me?'

A ring slowly slides down the string
Connecting ourselves as one
The ring hits my finger

You kiss my forehead ever so gently
Music starts playing
Yes, it was all just a dream

Damn my mind
Such an untouchable wonderful gift
I will never feel the real meaning

Behind the special symbol
Simply just laying here lonely [comments] => 2 [counter] => 196 [topic] => 43 [informant] => neglected1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Simply laying lonely

Contributed by neglected1 on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:10:36 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Dancing together in the flickering candle lights glow
Exchange of plentiful kisses
Discovering each other like never before

Oh, what a perfect night this has been
You laying next to me
Our limbs entagled together

I'm sure a thousand words were said
But truly only three captured my heart
I love you, those of which meant the most

Running my fingers through your hair
As you tell me a story
Something i will never forget

You pulled out a piece of string
And made me hold onto one end
You went on selling yourself to me

I was already sold the first time i met you
You went on saying how your emotions are thin just like the string
But your a good man

'I want to be the one inside of you
To come home to every night
Eventually have your children

A family to call our own
Even when things are shaky
We will come out on top

I just love you so much
So with this symbol that i recognize myself with
Will you marry me?'

A ring slowly slides down the string
Connecting ourselves as one
The ring hits my finger

You kiss my forehead ever so gently
Music starts playing
Yes, it was all just a dream

Damn my mind
Such an untouchable wonderful gift
I will never feel the real meaning

Behind the special symbol
Simply just laying here lonely




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Re: Simply laying lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 07:36:58 PM AEST
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I hope this isn't based on real feelings.You sound like a teriffic beautiful person.Dreams do come true.
Sinned


Re: Simply laying lonely (User Rating: 1 )
by Kione on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 08:58:27 PM AEST
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That poem touched me deeply. Terrific. I also hope it is not based on a real life occurance. And if it is, Good luck. Shocked me when you said it was a dream in there!




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