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Array ( [sid] => 71422 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => TRAIN TRACKS [time] => 2004-11-14 10:13:26 [hometext] => DRUGS ARE A TERRIBLE LOOK WHAT IT DOES TO THE HUMAN SOUL PLEASE COMMENT [bodytext] => ~Night time screams~

~Thunder claps~

~Lighting flashes and so begins
the attack~

~Human flesh~

~Scared beyond repair~
~Some are fresh~
~Train tracks~

~Open wounds~
~The monster back~
~Reaching for demons~

~Can't seen to find a reason~

~Looking inside~
~Just one more reason to die~

~Hell on earth~
~Seen through eyes~
~Glazed and fried~

~Blood stain sheets~
~Razor blades cries~

~Sadness overwhelms~
~The darkness of mankind~

~Searching for a way~
~Just waiting for the grave~

~As angels from above turn black~
~Within a life that has no dreams~

~~THUNDER CLAPS~~

~~LIGHTING FLASHES~~

~~AND SO BEGINS THE ATTACK~~

BY DENNIS LEMMEN
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 66 [informant] => lemmen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )

TRAIN TRACKS

Contributed by lemmen on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:13:26 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse

~Night time screams~

~Thunder claps~

~Lighting flashes and so begins
the attack~

~Human flesh~

~Scared beyond repair~
~Some are fresh~
~Train tracks~

~Open wounds~
~The monster back~
~Reaching for demons~

~Can't seen to find a reason~

~Looking inside~
~Just one more reason to die~

~Hell on earth~
~Seen through eyes~
~Glazed and fried~

~Blood stain sheets~
~Razor blades cries~

~Sadness overwhelms~
~The darkness of mankind~

~Searching for a way~
~Just waiting for the grave~

~As angels from above turn black~
~Within a life that has no dreams~

~~THUNDER CLAPS~~

~~LIGHTING FLASHES~~

~~AND SO BEGINS THE ATTACK~~

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-11-14 10:13:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: TRAIN TRACKS (User Rating: 1 )
by Flipped_out on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:22:27 AM AEST
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Oh wow this is the first poem of yours I think I have read..and I must say I am most impressed indeed

Loved the rythm...so deeply train like, almost hypnotic, got carried away by this..Glad Ive found this..I will check your other writes out,

TY Kelly x

Re: TRAIN TRACKS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:14:04 PM AEST
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Amazing write, Dennis... Keep them coming..
Jenni

Re: TRAIN TRACKS (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:48:40 PM AEST
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I am assuming this is about Heroin... for the tracks... I hate H. It has ruined so many I love, almost ruined me. It is true, it kills your dreams... It completely overtakes your mind. Everything you do in a day is based on it. It is like you are dead, you are only living for the next high, constantly thinking about the next high. ANd god forbid you can't get it... OMG is that hell... Thanks for sharing this peice.

Re: TRAIN TRACKS (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 05:44:47 PM AEST
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Hey Dennis! I really loved that poem, very well written, like all of the others that I have read ^.^
keep up the good work -hug-

*~Alicia~*

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