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Array ( [sid] => 71418 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Happy Girl, Sad Face [time] => 2004-11-14 09:53:16 [hometext] => We all have bad days....right? [bodytext] => I知 sorry you see my temporary look
It痴 not by choice this face I forsook
I hope soon to my smile you値l awake
And this emptiness inside I値l brake

I知 usually happy and ecstatic in life
But please forgive me as I go through my strife
Be patient, it痴 all I ask
The time will soon come, where I値l again laugh
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 61 [informant] => SweetRhythm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Happy Girl, Sad Face

Contributed by SweetRhythm on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:53:16 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



I知 sorry you see my temporary look
It痴 not by choice this face I forsook
I hope soon to my smile you値l awake
And this emptiness inside I値l brake

I知 usually happy and ecstatic in life
But please forgive me as I go through my strife
Be patient, it痴 all I ask
The time will soon come, where I値l again laugh




Copyright ツゥ SweetRhythm ... [ 2004-11-14 09:53:16]
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Re: Happy Girl, Sad Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:59:30 AM AEST
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Yes we all have those kinds of days and you expressed it so eloquently and truthfully.

I enjoyed this poem of yours, immensely.

Kie


Re: Happy Girl, Sad Face (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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awww another emotional poem, very sad, I too hope to see you smile again very soon

----'---@ a rose to cheer you up :) *hugs*

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: Happy Girl, Sad Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:18:48 PM AEST
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Yes, my friend, we definitely all have bad day and times. But don't give up. The sun will shine again and life will get back to normal. As they say, "it is always darkest before the dawn." Try to smile in spite of everything. Sometimes it even makes you feel better.

Smiles,
Rita


Re: Happy Girl, Sad Face (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:25:09 PM AEST
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So true have a bad day and keep looking forward to the good. Nice write.

wildejohnny.




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