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Array ( [sid] => 71417 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dreaming of You [time] => 2004-11-14 09:45:56 [hometext] => If you haven't got it in reality it is sometimes exciting to dream it up....( [bodytext] => The things I would do if I got half a chance
I’d dive into your arms at your first glance
Everything is so perfect within your stance
There is nothing about you that I would enhance

You are attractive and endearing to the human eye
As I see you and you pass me by
I know you know something but you don’t know the half
What I care for you, if I revealed you might laugh

Because of the surprise you may think it’s a joke
But if you could see what I see, you are no ordinary bloke
But then again, I am only dreaming
Are you there at all, I wonder this feeling
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 14 [informant] => SweetRhythm [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 19 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Dreaming of You

Contributed by SweetRhythm on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:45:56 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

The things I would do if I got half a chance
I’d dive into your arms at your first glance
Everything is so perfect within your stance
There is nothing about you that I would enhance

You are attractive and endearing to the human eye
As I see you and you pass me by
I know you know something but you don’t know the half
What I care for you, if I revealed you might laugh

Because of the surprise you may think it’s a joke
But if you could see what I see, you are no ordinary bloke
But then again, I am only dreaming
Are you there at all, I wonder this feeling

Copyright Â© SweetRhythm ... [ 2004-11-14 09:45:56]
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Re: Dreaming of You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 09:47:47 AM AEST
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awww Cor this is lovely, and sad also, a mixture of emotions,

takecare,
pixie xx

Re: Dreaming of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:21:25 PM AEST
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Why not dream it up. Write it up. I am getting rather up in years and I do that. I am not hurting anyone and it makes me happier. Do what is right for you, chickie.

Smiles
rita

Re: Dreaming of You (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 01:26:58 PM AEST
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great work once again.

wildejohnny.

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