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Array ( [sid] => 71383 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Mosaic of Life [time] => 2004-11-13 23:19:44 [hometext] => odd, different, confusing. you be the judge. thanks. [bodytext] => here i lay
tear stained
blood shed

bleeding for you
yearning for what has been left unsaid
my heart, it beats no longer.

i try to tell myself, those years are gone
and i will never have them back
scilence creeps, stillness seeps

my body cold
frozen in eternity, stuck in this flashback
long forgotten shame and deception

hath my life
shattered, insanity smiles coyly
like the broken bits of tile

dead eyes stare up into yours
my frayed soul to wander aimlessy
for your love to bloom, someones eternal

leave my soul to rest, move on.
for i am frozen in this mosaic
called life [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TwEeK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Mosaic of Life

Contributed by TwEeK on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:19:44 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

here i lay
tear stained
blood shed

bleeding for you
yearning for what has been left unsaid
my heart, it beats no longer.

i try to tell myself, those years are gone
and i will never have them back
scilence creeps, stillness seeps

my body cold
frozen in eternity, stuck in this flashback
long forgotten shame and deception

hath my life
shattered, insanity smiles coyly
like the broken bits of tile

dead eyes stare up into yours
my frayed soul to wander aimlessy
for your love to bloom, someones eternal

leave my soul to rest, move on.
for i am frozen in this mosaic
called life

Copyright © TwEeK ... [ 2004-11-13 23:19:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Mosaic of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:26:51 PM AEST
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brilliant. i loved this one. very intriguing and very well presented. i liked how you didnt set out to rhyme in this, im still compeled to do that in mine.

Re: The Mosaic of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by BrookeStar on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 12:19:31 AM AEST
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~WoW~ Awsome poem I likes alot

Re: The Mosaic of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by visualizing_life on Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 11:11:35 PM AEST
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very interesting but i like

Re: The Mosaic of Life (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Wednesday, 19th January 2005 @ 06:49:28 AM AEST
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seet write mine dont ryhime eather well g2g bye

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