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Array ( [sid] => 71382 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Somebody Out There [time] => 2004-11-13 23:17:46 [hometext] => suicidal poem..tell me what you think [bodytext] => Doesnt anybody care
About these feelings I have
These feelings..
Theyre eating away at my soul
Its funny how a simple pull of the trigger
Could blast away all
Your memories and worries
I lay here thinking,
Theres somebody out there waiting for me..
Theres somebody out there who is that
Special person Ive always wanted.
Looking in the mirror at my troubled face,
I hold a pistol up to my temple
thinking,
Do I really deserve what ive been given?
Am I really a horrible person that
Should just leave everyone alone?
I collaspe onto the floor,
I then realize,
That there is someone,
my reason,
my reason for living.
I lay there on the cold hard floor
Waiting to die
When my phone starts ringing
ring..ring..ring..
I get the nerve to answer it,
while bleeding to death I answer,
"hello.."
I try and explain
while going through so much pain
I confess my love to him
Then slowly..disappear.. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 154 [topic] => 36 [informant] => xlostwithoutyoux [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Somebody Out There

Contributed by xlostwithoutyoux on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:17:46 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Doesnt anybody care
About these feelings I have
These feelings..
Theyre eating away at my soul
Its funny how a simple pull of the trigger
Could blast away all
Your memories and worries
I lay here thinking,
Theres somebody out there waiting for me..
Theres somebody out there who is that
Special person Ive always wanted.
Looking in the mirror at my troubled face,
I hold a pistol up to my temple
thinking,
Do I really deserve what ive been given?
Am I really a horrible person that
Should just leave everyone alone?
I collaspe onto the floor,
I then realize,
That there is someone,
my reason,
my reason for living.
I lay there on the cold hard floor
Waiting to die
When my phone starts ringing
ring..ring..ring..
I get the nerve to answer it,
while bleeding to death I answer,
"hello.."
I try and explain
while going through so much pain
I confess my love to him
Then slowly..disappear..

Copyright © xlostwithoutyoux ... [ 2004-11-13 23:17:46]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Somebody Out There (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:29:02 PM AEST
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powerful and emotional write. written well. this had some very nice twists in it.

Re: Somebody Out There (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 05:42:25 AM AEST
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very deep and moving, yes someone does care *hugs*

takecare,
pixie xx

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