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what did you say?
I never thought
It could be done that way,
OOOH
your hands are cold
the pleasure is so strong
but you gotta let it go,
stop that
sssh
somebodies coming
I love it when you do that
but why can't you wait?
Yes I love you babe
but I gotta tell yoou
it feels so strange
to be on my knees
tied up this way
as you're very slowly
teasing me
pleasing me
making say your name.
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 274 [topic] => 60 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => insomniac )

Slave To your Love

Contributed by secretwind on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 09:37:47 PM in AEST
Topic: insomniac

What's that
what did you say?
I never thought
It could be done that way,
OOOH
your hands are cold
the pleasure is so strong
but you gotta let it go,
stop that
sssh
somebodies coming
I love it when you do that
but why can't you wait?
Yes I love you babe
but I gotta tell yoou
it feels so strange
to be on my knees
tied up this way
as you're very slowly
teasing me
pleasing me
making say your name.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-11-13 21:37:47]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Slave To your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Sunday, 14th November 2004 @ 10:20:18 AM AEST
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Help me...I have my mind in the gutter I think.

It says this is insomniac poetry and I am thinking sensual....

In a dry spell, it really emphasizes this to me.

*Wipes brow*

Excellent piece by the way.

Kie

Re: Slave To your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Friday, 19th November 2004 @ 12:15:05 PM AEST
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*shivers* Oooook *shivers some more*
beautful imagery, i f***in loved this (sorry to swear big people) but that was so cool.

Re: Slave To your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:52:18 PM AEST
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I see u watch Jerry Springer too. smile
I found this one to be humerous.
Luv the way u jus pull one into you with your writes.
U definently got it going on my handsome Prince
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Slave To your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 22nd November 2004 @ 04:52:23 PM AEST
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I see u watch Jerry Springer too. smile
I found this one to be humerous.
Luv the way u jus pull one into you with your writes.
U definently got it going on my handsome Prince
Luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Slave To your Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Thursday, 25th November 2004 @ 01:07:11 PM AEST
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Very well written.
brings you to a different place.
Love this poem
keep up the great writes
*Alicia~*

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