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Day by Day
Contributed by
Mesano
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Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 07:16:21 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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All the tears and all the pain,
All the grief I hold in vain,
All the death and all the life,
All the sorrow, all the strife.
All the love and all the hate,
All the time I have to wait,
All the anger, all the bliss,
Unyielding to love's poison kiss.
A fire inside brings silent tears,
Destroying all with burns and sears,
And dreaming of something far away,
As I take my life, day by day.
Copyright ©
Mesano
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2004-11-13 19:16:21]
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Re: Day by Day
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by CAUGHTinAdream on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 07:19:18 PM AEST
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| Good write, very emotional. Good job |
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Re: Day by Day
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by Dawny on
Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 10:46:05 AM AEST
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Hi
I really like this, you have captured alot of emotion, and you use good imagery. I think you are very talented, and should definately keep writing, I see only good things ahead for you.
Love Dawny xxx |
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