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That it was you who had killed me
If I were to cry, would you even see
That it was you who brought these tears to me
If I were to fall, would you even try
To help me up and help me get by
If I were to live, would you even try
To live your life without a lie
If I were to scream, would you even see
That it was you that planted this fury in me
If I were to cut, would you even see
That it was you that placed these scars on me
If I were to run, would you even try
To get me back to my former life
If I were to drown, you would even try
To save me and not let me die
If I were to bleed, would you even see
That it was you who had disfigured me
If I were to die, would you even see
That it was you who had killed me [comments] => 7 [counter] => 200 [topic] => 13 [informant] => EternalNight4x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 18 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Would you even see...

Contributed by EternalNight4x on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:00:09 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



If I were to die, would you even see
That it was you who had killed me
If I were to cry, would you even see
That it was you who brought these tears to me
If I were to fall, would you even try
To help me up and help me get by
If I were to live, would you even try
To live your life without a lie
If I were to scream, would you even see
That it was you that planted this fury in me
If I were to cut, would you even see
That it was you that placed these scars on me
If I were to run, would you even try
To get me back to my former life
If I were to drown, you would even try
To save me and not let me die
If I were to bleed, would you even see
That it was you who had disfigured me
If I were to die, would you even see
That it was you who had killed me



Copyright © EternalNight4x ... [ 2004-11-13 11:00:09]
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Re: Would you even see... (User Rating: 1 )
by kaitolyn on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:06:44 AM AEST
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wow! i really like that poem.
i love people who put feelings in poetry.
it's great!


Re: Would you even see... (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:10:03 AM AEST
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Wow this was great! I can really relate. It hurts to feel that way but just remember things will always get better! But anyway i enjoyed reading this, keep up the great work


Re: Would you even see... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:11:07 AM AEST
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Very visual amd full of flowing feelings, sorrow spilled forth in a full river fload, like a dam broached your words just flowed with strength, a beautiful write.


Re: Would you even see... (User Rating: 1 )
by screwup on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:15:06 AM AEST
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good and dark... just the way i like it... great job.
~screwup


Re: Would you even see... (User Rating: 1 )
by Unheard_Mute on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 11:21:20 AM AEST
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indeed, great write


Re: Would you even see... (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 12:00:04 PM AEST
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very dark and very sad, powerfully written,

takecare,
pixie xx


Re: Would you even see... (User Rating: 1 )
by cocacola1331 on Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 08:35:06 PM AEST
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Eerie, because those thoughts have crossed my mind also. I wish somebody would notice, somebody would care, but they don't. I wish I could offer you the things that I'm wishing and silently begging for, but I can't... I'm sorry, but really, if you ever feel the need to ***** out all the pain, Dev, I'm here... ha, I'm here in my own cynical way.




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